PancakesWitch
I know this is a bit late review but let me share mine. This story has a good background story. Every character has it own, not only the mcs. It is not like other novels that some character will pop out of nowhere. The story have a good story progression. There's a time skip but not too much that will make the reader's confuse. The character design is also good they are somehow reverse which is unique.The personality of the mcs is not align with their personas. For example the serious male mc, in other novel he will be the dark side or something like that, but here he is bright side. The fmc is cheerful and energetic which is usually in other novel the bright side, but here she is the dark side. So this uniqueness is a point for this story. The writing quality is also good, there's some minimal errors but it is still understandable and it will not affect the story in any way. The only thing that I can point as bad in this story is the lack of economic background. Idk in the later chapters but up to 300s there's still no monetary system. Overall this story is a must to read if you want something new.
This books creativity is a real reliever, most reincarnation and system novels now are just basically copy and pasted. while this book is not only unique, in the way that it defies the common loop of predictable writing. It also introduces the idea of multiple personal made from one person that aren't forced to fuse.
It is better than your 1st novel because 1st novel got chaotic around 100-200 chapters and i got lost while trying to follow the story because i was following other stories too this one is better and story flow has more order i cant find faults in this one and even if it has faults they arent obvious just some small things that doesnt break the flow and easily forgotten
A new experience and a change of pace so far for me 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 I saw some lacking creativity in the making of characters design but maybe that's because I just started reading and author fixed that in the next chapters. If it's so, then I have no problem to rate it 5 stars. Keep up the good work author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Love the story so far it pulls you in and cheer for the MC even though she was kicked down in life she maintains her personality. It shows that there is a story to every side the victor and the loser. I like the way the story develops from weak to strong and is not a cliche type of arcs that happen in other novels on this app. Thanks for the original novel. I am currently on chapter 26 so not too far into it will update when I have caught up.
I didn't realize this novel was PancakeWitch, I'm giving this review because I read her other novel with the caterpillar that became a butterfly and I loved the concept of the novel but often but head with the author, plus the quality was very so so. I've finished the first volume of this novel and I'm very happy with the way it makes me feel, the high quality, and the depth of the story. I am really enjoying reading this and I am very happy to see how much you've grown in this time. You have the ability and talents to take you far. I can't wait to see where you end up