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_Supremo_

_Supremo_

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It is better to be a shattered jade than unbroken pottery

2019-01-23 JoinedGlobal
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_8mth
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    "My name is Koushin, no last name just koushin. What I like is those that are likeable, what I hate is hateful. My dreams is those that are dreamable" - This is better much align in his character so far, as a jester.

    "Hmm, never thought before. Now that I think of it, I should have. Alright, My name is Koushin, no last name. My dream is to become strong enough to prevent anyone from taking away people I care about, and destroy those even thinking of it. I like working out and getting stronger, I also like spending time with my friends. I used to think I should work out all the time so I could become stronger as soon as possible, but I realized I should spend time with my friends as much as I can.
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_1yr
    Commented

    l - -40 -(-40) negative multiply by negative is postive = +40 so in this mission he will get +40 fav. if he fail the quest.

    - -40 favorability with Scar (Drops below Neutral.)
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    Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_1yr
    Posted

    Hi! First i would like to say thank you for the author for giving us this wonderful story. And for those who are supporting this story. Now for my review I would discuss the characters development, most specifically the MC. Next the story development. Next is other information like romance, relationship and world building. First is the MC's development. Well just like most of the readers, when i was first started to read the story I am like the most of you, I am annoyed with the MC. I feel like entering the story myself and strangle the MC, punch him, kick him, humiliate him just to knock some sense to him and wake him up from his naivety. But he started to change in volume 2 , while there's still the naivety it's not the much like in volume 1. He's starting to change albeit slowly but we can him changing. Then while reading it I realize that yeah, he still a child, teenager 14 or 15 I think so it's a given that he's still naive because of the sheltering from his father. Then it dawned me that not all 14 to 15 years old kids is the same. Some of them is brave, courageous, mature while some are the opposite. Maybe we the readers are used to read a mature kid MC from other stories so when we read this we were annoyed by the fact that he is like that. I say give the MC a chance, give the author a chance. This story is great and I knew it. Next the story development, the story development of this story is slow but not too slow. We can still see the development of every chapter, the struggle the characters have to face in their every day life. And it's interesting if you're going to ask me. This type of development is not rare many story used this type of story development and I am glad that this story uses this type of story development because it's fitted the story portrait. Lastly the other information such as the romance, the relationship of the MC to other character and world building. First the romance, well im in chapter 400 and until now there's no clear view who are the real fmc. So because of my curiosity I searched the real life merlin in the internet I read his story in many websites and platform and I found out that his significant others is none other than *toot* well I dont want to spoil anyone but i'll give you a hint. Before chapter 400 the mc and the supposedly fmc is already together, not together like lover's. They are together like friends, companion something like that. So let's just wait until the author give a definite answer who will be the fmc. Oh btw my search results says that Merlin had 2 or 3 lovers. Then let's discuss the relationship of the mc to other characters. Like what I stated earlier the MC is naivety so he tends to trust others blindly. There are his friends from the same world and his relationship with them is still good most specially with the girl, if you know what I mean. There's a lot of females around the MC but well a story without a dense mc is not a good story. So even when the females around the MC giving him so much signs the MC is still unperturbed because why not?. Lastly the world development there's not much to discuss about the world development but I think the author really searched and study the history to give us the best story he can ever give. Like what I said earlier I also searched facts about this story. And I can see the similarities of the real event and this story. I'm in chapter 400+ and I'm planning to write a review again in the comment section when Im in the later part of the story. Again please give this story a chance. Believe me as a veteran reader this story is overwhelming in potential to become one of the top story out there.

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    Earth's Greatest Magus
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    just here to destroy the holy number

    'If she is so stupid that she prefers getting beaten instead of taking a Ballot, that's her problem. I don't plan on opening an idiot shelter.'
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    Supreme Magus
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Replied to HolyOniiSama

    Hi Author I just want to ask if they will have a child? Mc and kushina I mean. I dont care if it is not naruto lol just want to know.

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    Naruto: The GodLike Hokage + Multiverse
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    You guys forgot the one and only Johnny English

    James Bond, Ethan Hunt, Jason Bourne, Yan Shuangying ... They were all rare elite cards, and it was expected that they wouldn't be available for a while.
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    Marvel's Superman [Completed]
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Replied to Seikatsu

    Because he is the MC, you should know by now that all MCs in Chinese cultivation novel are all arrogant. They are above of all so you should not be surprised by their personality.

    He said to Nie Ling indifferently. The increase in his strength made his hands itchy. It was just the right time to satisfy those demon beasts.
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    Global Cultivation: First-time Top-up for the Ultimate Destiny Treasure
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    I will name you as Chupapi, in my world it represents joy and laughter. The same as you, you made me smile. Then the other one will be Munyanyo. It is the same but used with different word.

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    Death Guns In Another World
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    nooo! it should like this! One for all all for one bayanihan of d pipol!!!!!!

    GO ELITES GO!!!"
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented
    [Would you like to equip: - Dog Collar?]
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    Classless Ascension
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Replied to hentai_ecchi_Movie

    Nope it is a mythical Bird in Filipinos myth. Just like the Phoenix and Vermilion bird.

    Species: Albino Magpie(Sarimanok Strain)
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    Omega Summoner
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    The is the must have cheats that im going to ask if ever I die then isekaid. With Id create and the gamer system. In my opinion gamer system is the most broken system out there. I have not read any more broken than that. If iim going to get a wish it will be like this. 1. Gamer system ( 2. Id create (As far as I know the id create in the gamer (manga) is only applicable in that world because of a certain rule or law in thag world so getting this ability will ensure that im going to learn it) 3. Word of soul Magic If im going to only get 1 wish it will be the gamer system. Two or more it will be that order.

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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Posted

    I know this is a bit late review but let me share mine. This story has a good background story. Every character has it own, not only the mcs. It is not like other novels that some character will pop out of nowhere. The story have a good story progression. There's a time skip but not too much that will make the reader's confuse. The character design is also good they are somehow reverse which is unique.The personality of the mcs is not align with their personas. For example the serious male mc, in other novel he will be the dark side or something like that, but here he is bright side. The fmc is cheerful and energetic which is usually in other novel the bright side, but here she is the dark side. So this uniqueness is a point for this story. The writing quality is also good, there's some minimal errors but it is still understandable and it will not affect the story in any way. The only thing that I can point as bad in this story is the lack of economic background. Idk in the later chapters but up to 300s there's still no monetary system. Overall this story is a must to read if you want something new.

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    Demon Queen Rebirth: I Reincarnated as a Living Armor?!
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Replied to Layous

    Umm what anime does it belong to? Im pretty sure its familiar to me but I forgot which anime it belongs to.

    Excalibur Sword
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    Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Replied to The_Loresharer

    it was said to be modified in the earlier chapters. so he can use it normally without side effects.

    "You have obtained the Flowing Cloud Sect Sect Master's cultivation…"
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    Fantasy Simulator
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented
    'I'll keep my promise. Why are you in a hurry, Morgana?'
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Replied to HiddenSageMilkMan

    Its from the higher ups. He was in coma for two weeks so they want him to recover first. It is not really recommended to ask an seriously injured soldier after he was healed to go back to military. They often send the soldier in a vacation or day off (long one) or ask him to attend some school ( if still young ) or just send him to some places where theres no tension as a logistics officer ( if older ).

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    The Invincible Full-Moon System
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    It means that your blood is only a half of what it is supposed to be... in other word youre....

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    The Invincible Full-Moon System
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    Uwo~ uwu~ uwo~

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    The Invincible Full-Moon System
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  • _Supremo_
    _Supremo_2yr
    Commented

    Madara: "You won't understand Hashirama. We need to stop Boruto being born in this world!"

    "You wouldn't understand, Hashirama." Uchiha Madara looked at his friend gravely. "This world needed its peace. With true peace, there would be no war. No one would get hurt. No one would get swallowed by hatred."
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    Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler
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