Edgelord666
Great start man!! keep it uup!!! it really shows the dark side of DC and how the system has failed there. Every time the hero saves people so many innocents die and every time they come back from prison same happens. Inderactly the heroes have killed so many innocents and giving more than 2nd chance is already too much. Dont drop the fiic!! please
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Well... For now he has done what he has promised, which is a work out of the community although personally there are some routes that I do not like as much as learning magic when you already have powers or vice versa but apart from that is all right. The MC has clear and concise goals, we are presented before reincarnating with these goals and reached the point of being influential in their world with these goals for which there is a feeling of continuity and that we are really seeing the same person But with skills and in another world. The scripture is what I like least, those dialogues as if they were scripts are little practical and annoying, this is a good tool for novice writers but it does not become part of the author's style I hope you change this little by little. On the design of the world, I think the author presents decently Gotham, but until there I can comment on this since he does not have many changes of EstΓ©narios but presents the real danger that is to live in Gotham.
I won't judge since it is in its early stage. I think this is a good premise that if done right, can make an amazing story. Hopefully, the author doesn't drop this as I've seen too many dropped stories with a good plot. Good luck with this story I shall come back in the future when this has more chapters
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