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If you want a ruthless and murderous MC, this book is for you. I was quite interested by the name Vishnu because I knew that was the name of the Hindu God. I wonder if that had relevance to the story later on. The writing quality have some grammar mistakes, but the word usage itself is alright. Only some problems with punctuations and some sentences could have been divided into two or three. As for the character development, I'm looking forward to how Vishnu will change after he encounters more hardships. He loves to torture people but it was out of justice, though how he enact that justice may seem to be too much for some. It gives him andinteresting moral compass. Overall, go try to read the book if you like crazy MC like this!
Very interesting start. Love MCs that aren't afraid to get their hands dirty and Vishnu certainly fits that ticket. I've only read the first few chapters, but so far the grammar is decent and it's easy to read, the small mistakes are few and far between, mostly consisting of miscapitalizations that in no way effect the reading experience. I'd be interested in finding out if their is any going back and forth between worlds. I look forward to reading more.
Worth a read. The characters are well written and the story seems to be progressing in a good direction. It is in early to comment too much but the story seems promising and as the title suggests there is a universe to explore so will be reading it and will comment further down the line again. … Now webnovel won’t let me comment it cause 140 words. So I’m typing some random s**t here so no need to worry. Guy 1- Why aren’t koalas actual bears? Guy 2- Cause they don’t meet the koalafication. … Guy 1-you’re American when you go into the bathroom and out of the bathroom but what are you when you’re IN the bathroom? Guy 2- what? Guy1- Europeein. … It takes guts to be an organ donor. (read again I know you didn’t get it). … If math is mathematical and quizzes are quizzical then what are tests?
Since most authors rate their novel 5 stars, I shall do the same right? surely not looking for any excuse to rate my story 5 stars... surely not. ... Now then as every author would like to say, please check out my novel and be patient with it. I would take all constructive criticism and try to improve upon them. As English is not my mother tongue so there could be structural mess but it'll get better I promise. Lastly please vote my novel with power stones so web novel knows that you're enjoying what you're reading and don't forget to add it to the library. ( I definitely did not copy that line from a youtube channel... ahem) ... Take care guys and be safe. peace;