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I'm four and a half years old. I like cookies. Whoever you are, you deserve all the hugs and good things... oh, and cookies. Not all of them though, leave some for me.
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Really fun. Witty characters, and a very interesting blend of epic fantasy with modern world elements, and also, surprisingly, dark fantasy too. Did not really expect it, but the world is shaping up to be incredibly interesting, all with lightheartedness and humor which I'm sure will help later on. Klein seems to have some real issues in that head of his... In a bizarrely fun way.
Yea, I will still be continuing, but the releases won't be very frequent for this month. After June, I intend to publish at least 2ch/day. Look forward to it!
... My bad. Was pretty excited to go full throttle from here to the end of the arc, but alas!
You've no idea how much this comment means to me. I don't always have the time to polish my prose, so some future chapters or lines may seem clunky. Once I finish writing the first volume however, I do intend to go back and make sure everything is of consistent quality. Sincerely, your comment has motivated me to keep my standards high, and I apologise if I don't always meet those expectations. Thank You.
Thank you for sticking with this so far, I genuinely appreciate it. I also really appreciate you noticing the finer details in the groundwork I've put here in the first few chapters. You're reading this with a care that I reasonably wouldn't expect from anyone going in, so just know that means a lot. I will definitely be building upon and answering these mysteries, and hopefully I will end up earning your trust as an author. Slight correction, however: Derek and Rachel are Winston's friends, who I focused on in the first chapter. I hope the abrupt perspective shift wasn't too jarring, although I feel it may have been. I'll try to do better next time! For now, I just hope you can come to enjoy this read just as much as I enjoy writing it.
I really appreciate you making it this far. Thanks for commenting. I hope you'll stick with it and tolerate my flaws until I correct them. I'll also soon edit the beginning chapters to hopefully make them less confusing. Anyway, you're a star :)
Ah. Right. I should have made it clearer that Thatch and Winston's stories would be told in parallel. Thanks for bringing this to my attention!
Hi, Author here, shamelessly evaluating my own writing. If I were more narcissistic, i'd give myself a perfect five. But since, at the point i'm writing this review, only a few chapters are released, it'll probably be a while before anyone even reads this work, much less reviews it. I can say with confidence, i've given a lot of thought about the characters and the world, and hopefully it'll come across to any reader. What i'm much less confident about is how stable the updates will be, though I will definitely try my best for several chapters a week, with the aim to improve that consistency without sacrificing quality. Anyway, please review and criticize anything and everything about this! Your comments will only help me improve. And most of all have fun and enjoy