Reviews of Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
PurpleSpring
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over all nice start... but it seem like u don't have plot or ideas wht to write 😑 cause in one chptr u only include a little to nothing...like last one I read mc pick up the herb and than u introduce a two char which was out of flow a bit nd there is no excitement in reading ch like this...or any anticipation... so I suggest u should chech other novels or take reference frm it...there is one novel..my diciple all are villain...
Just started reading but can say it got potential to be a really good one of that depends on update speed haha ok will review again if any changes[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
After reading all currently available chapters(21), I am pleasantly surprised with how good this novel is. I've never been one to read long detailed reviews so I will just sum up some of the things i enjoy about this novel. ∙ Grammar is better than 90% of the novels on this site. ∙ The readability feels very smooth and does not feel like any one thing is being dragged out nor that anything interesting is being skipped out on ∙ While a system novel, the MC is not blinded by it and can think for himself while the system gives him goals. ∙ The MC is a reincarnator who fully integrated with the original hosts memories which means he's not an idiot about the world and doesn't know a thing about it. ∙ MC starts out strong so we can go directly into the premise of the story, which is training disciples
So far so good. Don't really have much to complain aside from it being a bit of a slow burner? (though that's not rly a bad thing). I'm also just really glad that I found a novel that has decent writing and won't give me a headache every chapter, but that's just me being a grammar critic. I'm quite fond of stories with an op mc having disciples because the first ever wuxia novel I read was Library of Heaven's Path with a similar concept. Stuck through 2k chapters and while I did enjoy it for the most part, it bummed me out a bit when the students weren't involved as much with the Mc's journey as I thought? Like yes they were THERE and achieved great things but it felt like the author would brush them aside a lot, kind of like props that just hung around the Mc and only moved when the situation called for it?(and even in the end we didn't get a proper resolution. Mc got married and became the Supreme emperor but what about his students who literally left everything behind - even when they themselves were rulers of their own groups - to follow him ascend to a higher world? Did they get married and have kids of their own too? Not to mention they left their families behind while Mc at least got to bring his parents) So for this story I'm hoping that the students growth will have actual impact to whatever next will happen and that they won't fade into the background after their "arc" ends If that makes sense. Granted the vibe so far is relaxed and it doesn't seem like the Mc has to go on a long adventure (yet) where he has to bring his disciples with him so I might not have to worry much. But if it ever goes that route and the plot becomes more complex for whatever reason, just please don't push the students aside. Lmao that's literally my only concern right now. But yeah those are my thoughts. Keep up the good work 👍
Ohhhhhhh, I love this novel. Where the MC did not force anything to the story, his disciple skills, but just going by the flaw. The system only gave a major quest and side quest which to accept talented people but it letting MC to be its slave. Go on, author. Let me see what this novel can offer me or us in a long run. Support!!!
