Reviews of Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
SorryImJustDiamond
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I have a problem that is from chapter 31 onwards the chapters appear broken for example (a whole paragraph of Chinese letters, spaces for each letter making it impossible to translate and finally the appearance of symbols trying to make emojis) that all added makes history is illegible
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This is a great story. I like the setup and the fact that there is no system. It's refreshing.The grammar is great too. However, having reached chapter 219 I think it is getting a little stale. There is no exitement anymore. Everything goes too smootly for the protagonists. There is no struggle, no challenge anymore. Everything goes exactly like the protagonists want. An example: One of the protagonsists says "Although we might not have experience in shipbuilding, we are still able to build a better ship than anything currently in the market". The official they are talking to simply accepts that. This story tries to stay realistic (as much as you can anyway with a setting like this) but seemingly don't take into account that there are other intelligent and innovative people in the world. Yes, they have experience from the 21st century and it gives them a great advantage, but that does not mean that they incapable of losing. I think this story should try to get back to its roots, if just a little.
I like this novel. Unlike your typical isekai when you get isekai alone and got some cheat ability from goddess or you got system to help you get exp, this novel dont do that and Im love it. Paul and Jonathan had two different major one in mechanical-electrical engineering and one in civil engineering. Both of them were smart and succesfull engineer who got reincarnated to cover each other weakness, quite new concept I think and that is that make this novel great. Its just that I think that this novel is face paced and Im little bit disappointed because there were many storyline/arc, struggle, char development that you can write in the beginning of the story. And I think that there were something interaction that lacking between both of them. Like both of them were too easy to accept their situation. I hope that there more in their interaction. Add some drama in the beginning between them, etc. But overall its great novel I hope the author dont drop this and keep uploading
So far I've read 10 chapters to make my review. I can say that the premise it is well thought out and planned. This book can easily be in my top 10 if this quality keeps up. Not only that this is the type of novel that would have over 1000 chapters. So, author you better have written those back up chapters just incase. Keep up the good work. -LSM(W)