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lbaro978dCommentedYou should calculate that again...
In terms of strength, there had also been a surge. Before, a single root could exert a force of 1000 kilograms, but now it had soared to 4000 kilograms, which is 2 tons of force.- lbaro9712dReplied to Azrail93
Allright. So if he wins the 3-star challenge, will he get an s-rank Badge?
I obviously researched her team(s) since I was planning to go for a 3-star Badge, and I was shocked when I saw the lineup of her main/strongest team. Apparently, Stephanie Stone was as talented a trainer as her brother, or rather her brother was as talented as his sister. Either way, she was someone who was close to attaining the title of a Master. Stephanie's main team was entirely at the platinum stage, and she was only one Pokemon short of reaching the 4 mid and 1 high stage 6 Pokemon requirement set for Master-Class Trainers. - lbaro9712dCommented
Just to make sure I am getting this right: Mikail can collect S-rank badges while challenging on a 3 star level? 3 Star meaning he can only use up to silver stage Pokemon? And a 4 star challenge for an s-rank badge would include gold stage pokemon?
I obviously researched her team(s) since I was planning to go for a 3-star Badge, and I was shocked when I saw the lineup of her main/strongest team. Apparently, Stephanie Stone was as talented a trainer as her brother, or rather her brother was as talented as his sister. Either way, she was someone who was close to attaining the title of a Master. Stephanie's main team was entirely at the platinum stage, and she was only one Pokemon short of reaching the 4 mid and 1 high stage 6 Pokemon requirement set for Master-Class Trainers. - lbaro9712dCommented
That was a good section. The increased amount of interaction between the shelder and Mikail immediately made it more interesting to read.
As usual, it would also improve his potential, ensuring that he could keep growing stronger if he wanted to. I did not plan to prevent any of the guardians from training themselves to get stronger. They were free to do so while they did their job to guard the reserve, and I would even leave them some decent resources/supplements if that was what they wanted. Still, this was obviously only under the stipulation that they could not neglect their actual job. Due to our agreement, acting as security guards had priority over their training after all. - lbaro9713dCommented
This is another example of a scene that could have been fleshed out some more. Even if it was relatively easy to subdue them, you could have taken the chance to showcase Hades prowess. Since all battle scenes are always summarized, I honestly don't know how much power a gold or dark gold stage Pokemon has. What exactly are they able to do? How much destruction? How large is the area they can affect with their attacks. You need to add some details, some comparisons, something to visualize it so we, the readers, can imagine it.
On Giratiday of said week, we finally saw some action which we were allowed to interfere with since the two fighters were causing too much damage to the environment. Still, they were not all that strong, just at the (high) gold stage, so Hades alone was enough to pacify the two and separate them. - lbaro9713dCommented
When you wrote the battles Mikail was fighting himself (not Pokemon battles) you showed that you can write good battles. Why do you insist on glossing over every single Pokemon battle that has happened so far? I cannot remember a single fleshed out pokemon battle in this whole story... đ
Weiss had her first battle 3 hours after the opening ceremony, and she used her Bounsweet, who by now had reached the (mid) bronze stage, to beat her opponent's (low) bronze stage Murkrow. She joined us after that since she had no further battles that day, and while we watched some of the battles that were taking place, we mostly strolled around the city for the rest of the day. - lbaro9713dCommented
I don't know how often I have read this paragraph just with different Pokemon... It really needs to be changed a little cause it is getting very repetitive.
On Mewday of week 4, the week we had off, Paravti/Beedrill came to me and asked me to check her status sheet since she felt as if she was done with her limit-breaking phase. A quick check confirmed that she was right, and if that had happened just two days earlier, we would have had to postpone her breakthrough until I was able to enter Utopia. Thankfully, that did not happen, and as soon as we had the confirmation that she was ready, I announced her upcoming breakthrough over UtopiaFM. - lbaro9713dCommented
What exactly was she / were they looking out for? Some more detail would make this much more immersive.
Once we made it to our goal, we proceeded to patrol the area and Elisabeth made sure to occasionally point out what she/we were looking for. We also paid a visit to a lot of the tribes, groups, families, and loners hanging out in the area Elisabeth was in charge of. The groups aside, some of the loners piqued my interest, more specifically the older ones. - lbaro9713dCommented
I would have liked to see a situation like this shown in more detail, not just glossed over... Could have been exciting to read.
By the end of the three days, I could freely say that Elisabeth shared nearly nothing I did not already know, the things I did find interesting were her interactions with the Pokemon we came across during our trip. She had an interesting way of avoiding conflict, which appeared to be her favorite stance during the last three days, though that did not mean that she was afraid of a confrontation since she did have to use intimidation/force once or twice when being nice did not work. - lbaro9713dCommented
600 chapters and the official journey is almost beginning. Meaning, the "prologe" is almost over. đ I am looking forward to more. At the same time I am hoping that with the official start of the journey, the author will start to go into more detail with what is happening. More showing than telling. More interactions between characters, and not just with his Pokemon. Less status updates because it feels like especially the last 200 chapters consisted of about 60% status updates with an evolution or breakthrough happening almost every chapter. The MC has too many Pokemon by now to continue like that. It's getting repetitive, so I am hoping the author uses the start of Mikails journey to change the writing a little. That said, I am looking forward to reading more about Mikail's journey. Thank you for writing this story. đ
CH78 (600), Disaster Relief (8) - lbaro9714dCommented
I am noticing a KFC addiction there...
The next two days were spent getting a lay of the city. Finding the important locations such as the most recommended restaurants and fast food joints as well as the local KFC and KFP branches. Naturally, I also took a look at where the logistic building I would be working at was. I likewise made sure to memorize where I would be able to buy or sell resources in case I needed them. This included the PokeMart as well as other stores. - lbaro9714dReplied to Azrail93
It's been too long... What stage are Overlord Pokemon and do legendary trainers have Pokemon on that level?
At around 8 p.m. I threw out the question of what they wanted to do tonight and the majority wanted me to do a puppet show similar to the one I performed as a training exercise today, just with them as the model. Oh, and naturally their opponents had to be some superspecies like the pseudo-legendaries or other overlord-level species. - lbaro9717dCommented
I had to read that twice because the first time I actually read "burlesque"... Mikael might be a little too young for that kind of covert mission...
Mr. Cameron looked at me, waiting for my answer, so I began considering his question. I did not really mind doing a covert mission or a solo one, or a covert solo mission, so that was not a problem. Honestly, this whole thing felt like it was straight out of some special agent fantasy, and it stirred some "bondesque" feelings in me. - lbaro9721dReplied to Tylor_Roney
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A group of Ursaring... And Heracross dispersed them... đ¤¨
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probably starly...?
Through this period of training, Tailow's size had increased significantly. From its original height of about 0.3 meters, it had grown to about 0.5 meters, almost catching up to poorly developed Staraptors. - lbaro9723dReplied to Iceling
lol indeed...
*END OF THE TALK* - lbaro971mthCommented
Easter Eggs should fit into the story seamlessly making the reader feel like it is familiar from somewhere, then realize it causing him/her to chuckle. In this case it is simply like a punch in the face. Not subtle at all and not fitting either. It ruins the continuity and that is why people don't like it. I suggest not doing something this obvious again. Additionally, if you want to add more Easter Eggs, then they should fit into the timeline.
 [AN- I don't know why people find this Easter egg unfunny, i just want to make you people happyđĽšđ. If you find this un-funny please pretend this as a non-cannon interaction, you can skip Zoro's involvement entirely if you want to. Please tell if if you guys want to see these type of interaction. And i am sorry if i made you angry.] - lbaro972mthPosted
I like the setting of the story and I am especially looking forward to what happens after the Rocks Pirates disband. One big problem I see with this story is the fact that the the writing / translation quality seems to get worse with every chapter. It starts out allright but as of approximately chapter 70 it really starts bothering me...
- lbaro972mthCommented
Not a good idea. Calling all Lunarians "King" makes this more confusing, not easier to understand.
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