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  • lbaro97
    lbaro9729d
    Commented

    I like the story so far, but I must say, it really is a Pokemon alternate universe.

    Ch 12 Changing Houses (Part 4)
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    Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog
    Fantasy · Snorlax777
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro972mth
    Replied to NegansPalace

    Hopefully soon...

    Ch 8 The First Meeting Between Fate
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    A Journey That Changed The World.
    Fantasy · NegansPalace
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro972mth
    Commented

    Why the sudden name change?

    Under the support of the high-level Feather Fall, Rheagar glided out for more than 80 miles before stopping in front of a hill.
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    A Necromancer Who Just Wants to Plant Trees
    Games · The Key In 10 Years
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro972mth
    Commented

    Please. Whatever you do: No Harem!!!

    No Harem!
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    Pokemon and the Unchained Mind(Pokemon SI AU)
    Anime & Comics · soul_words
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro972mth
    Posted

    Not bad. The refreshing lack of faceslapping makes this an enjoyable read. The grammar and spelling is not that good for the first 13 chapters. Coincidentally, those are the chapters that have been translated. As of chapter 14, where according to the author the original content starts, the writing quality gets noticeably better, though it is not perfect. I'd suggest that the author takes another look at the first 13 chapters and edits them again. As it is, I am looking forward to more. 😃

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    Naruto: Fujitora Template
    Anime & Comics · TomTucker777
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro973mth
    Commented

    I am getting strong Eragon vibes....

    …Ebrithil?
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    HP: Descendant of Merlin
    Book&Literature · DarkKingGrutmore
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro973mth
    Replied to Dungeo

    Thanks 😄

    Ch 17 {Cloaked Danger}
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    Reborn Inside How To Train Your Dragon World
    Movies · Dungeo
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro973mth
    Commented

    Is there already a picture of the dragon?

    Ch 17 {Cloaked Danger}
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    Reborn Inside How To Train Your Dragon World
    Movies · Dungeo
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro973mth
    Posted

    This is a really good one. I just read through all 29 chapters in one go and didn't notice the time go by. If that doesn't indicate a good story then I don't know what does. Looking forward to more. 😁

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    Pokemon and the Unchained Mind(Pokemon SI AU)
    Anime & Comics · soul_words
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro973mth
    Commented

    Did we catch up to the author so we have to wait for new chapters for you to translate? What is the original called by the way (the raw)?

    Ch 1033 This...This is...
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    I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro974mth
    Commented

    As I said before, I don't get it!!! What is his current level called?

    "Congratulations to Fellow Daoist Shen for improving in the Dao of Talismans. Earth Meteorite Talismans and Ice Arrow Talismans require a very deep foundation in the Dao of Talismans. In time, Fellow Daoist Shen might be able to successfully advance to the second level." Mu Jin's flattery came easily. At the same time, she asked habitually, "How many sets of materials do you need this time?"
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    Eternal Life Begins with Taking a Wife
    Eastern · Cucumber Lover
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro974mth
    Commented

    I don't understand the progression here. Is he now a second level high ranking talisman master? Were there second level intermediate and second level low grade ranks too? Or is his level now "Talisman Master", as in that is the level after high grade? If so, didn't it say that he meeds to reach foundation establishment for that? Honestly, I am very confused. It feels seriously inconsistent.

    "A Level Two Talisman Master!" He looked at the changes on the virtual interface. Shen Ping could not hide his excitement. He did not expect to break through to the second level so quickly. He still could not make a second level talisman. But after breaking through to the second level, it would be very easy to make high-grade talismans. For example, he could craft the more lethal Ice Arrow Talisman, the Earth Meteorite Talisman, and so on, in one go.
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    Eternal Life Begins with Taking a Wife
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro974mth
    Commented

    I think the paragraph was repeated here.

    Yuga, Malva, and Nick continued to watch as others placed their bids. Nick stayed silent, while Yuga and Malva remained calm.
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    I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro974mth
    Posted

    This story is grammatically correct and easy to read. I also think the synopsis is good and initially the synopsis matches the story. The one big problem I have with this story is the fact that the story, and especially the MC's actions, are contradictory. Considering that this story is actually advertised as a "Slice if Life", you see surprisingly little of it. At least that's the case before Chapter 30. Since the paywall already starts at chapter 32, it's unclear to me at the moment whether "Slice of Life" will appear more frequently at some point.

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    Cultivator's Slice of Life: Spiritual Farming System
    Fantasy · BigToad
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro974mth
    Commented

    It's better this way 👍

    Regarding the Galar region, it won't be included in this book because the story had already progressed significantly when the eighth generation was introduced. Suddenly introducing a region like Galar, which hadn't been mentioned previously, would feel abrupt, so I hope you understand.
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    I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro974mth
    Commented

    I don't really agree with this. He leaves a sect because he doesn't want the associated danger that comes with it, and yet, 20 chapters later he wants to join another sect, knowing that it will bring the associated danger once again. It doesn't make much sense. I will continue reading this but if I don't understand to his decision by the time I hit the paywall, then I won't continue.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: Two Years Passed
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    Cultivator's Slice of Life: Spiritual Farming System
    Fantasy · BigToad
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro974mth
    Commented

    Why "Lucky"? It doesn't seem to fit the context...

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    I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro975mth
    Replied to darkut

    Makes sense...

    Tsareena's Trop Kick was their signature move. Despite being an intermediate skill, due to the perfect synergy with their species, Trop Kick could unleash extraordinary power when used by Tsareena.
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    I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro975mth
    Replied to bearnard_bear97

    Really? 😅 I might not be a native speaker but "Trop" is a word I really haven't seen before. I'll look it up. My bad. 👍

    Tsareena's Trop Kick was their signature move. Despite being an intermediate skill, due to the perfect synergy with their species, Trop Kick could unleash extraordinary power when used by Tsareena.
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    I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97
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  • lbaro97
    lbaro975mth
    Posted

    The story is okay. In fact, this kind of space exploration and technological discovery is something I'd like to have more of. The most irritating problem of this story is the fact that the translator apparently doesn't know how to differentiate between a star system, a galaxy, a star cluster and the void between stars. These words are just thrown around arbitrarily without fitting the context. I've been told that in the raws the terminology is apparently used correctly, so the translator is at fault.

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    Become The Guard AI Of The Lost Civilization After Transmigration
    Sci-fi · Almost Got Rich
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