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This is a great story. I like the setup and the fact that there is no system. It's refreshing.The grammar is great too. However, having reached chapter 219 I think it is getting a little stale. There is no exitement anymore. Everything goes too smootly for the protagonists. There is no struggle, no challenge anymore. Everything goes exactly like the protagonists want. An example: One of the protagonsists says "Although we might not have experience in shipbuilding, we are still able to build a better ship than anything currently in the market". The official they are talking to simply accepts that. This story tries to stay realistic (as much as you can anyway with a setting like this) but seemingly don't take into account that there are other intelligent and innovative people in the world. Yes, they have experience from the 21st century and it gives them a great advantage, but that does not mean that they incapable of losing. I think this story should try to get back to its roots, if just a little.

Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World

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Sorry to hear that bro, but don't worry, just because everything went smoothly doesnt' mean there won't be any challengers, this is like the amuse bouche, the bigger challenges will be on the latest chapters that's where we will show the battle of the industrialist