Cie-Lbitch
I must say, the idea of the story is interesting and the events that are happening thru ought the story just draws you in deeper. The MC is interesting, but i felt like it was missing depth. Yes, we know her backstory, but those vents just seemed like they were too short(?). But other than that it is amazing, would recommend reading this novel!
Interesting story. The mc seems like the feisty type. I think you still need to work on the story flow though. I can already sense that this book is gonna be action-packed! The mc definitely has a past, a not-so-pretty past that's enough to spike readers' curiousity . Nice work, keep up the good work author🌹❤
The synopsis is catching, I couldn't wait to know more about Naiah, her life and the secrets bound to unveil. The name coded university is unique too. The first few chapters gave me chills. I can only imagine how she must feel with those nightmares. I love your writing style. Among the other things. Good job author. I'm hoping for more updates.
Hi, hello So. The story is very interesting, I especially like the first chap. The main character is like an ordinary but not so ordinary girl, and overall the story is good. Even if there are several misspellings (because no one is perfect). I still think that it's very good. tbh, i don't especially love the main character, but i love the world she's in. I hope this helps.😊