Interesting story. The mc seems like the feisty type. I think you still need to work on the story flow though. I can already sense that this book is gonna be action-packed! The mc definitely has a past, a not-so-pretty past that's enough to spike readers' curiousity . Nice work, keep up the good work authorš¹ā¤
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