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I have read 6 chapters. This is the first time that I am reading a story with a woven game aspect in it. Innovative. The story is developing nicely. The writing quality is good. There is stability of updates as a number of chapters have been posted. Lazar the main character has been designed well. The other characters have yet to show themselves during the course of the story. The background has been described well.
It is written well, sometimes I found the dialogues to be a little bit confusing. I am 'personally' not a big fan of mixing sci-fi + with greek mythology + gaming. (The weapon ranking for instance). In my opinion some may find it hard to understand the importance behind it if they never played RPG's etc - like weapon defense rank "E" (you gotta know what it means) and what is be the difference between a rank "E" and "S"... The Chaos part kind of reminded me of 'Fate - Stay', any references? Good luck.
Hello Everyone, I’m the author of this novel, Wankile, it’s totally an auto-review. I welcome you in reading this novel, I think I said enough in the sypnosis not to have to present the story more so I will move on to the reason why I did not put 5 stars. People have pointed this out to me and when I read it again I also realized it, I sometimes make sentences that are far too long. That harms the story and the attention that readers will pay to details, I will fix this and hope you will enjoy reading.
For the most, I enjoyed this story. I did feel like the story was a bit not related to the main plot in the second chapter, but it was a background plot and I could understand that. The MC is different than most male MCs. and the thing I'm most happy about is that it is not a harem. As a fellow author, I would only advise if you'd like to focus on using less run-on sentences. I noticed a lot of those, but to me personally, it wasn't a huge problem.