RenuKakkar
A poetess ( Poemhunter.com) & a published Author (Granny's Return from Heaven as an Incredible Car). I write articles, do numerology & palmistry. I am a Divine Reiki Master.
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Thank you for the interest in the novel. Please continue reading and give your suggestions in the comments so that I can further develop the story. I am writing another novel called,'Born Again' which is on past life regression. Have a look at that too. I need to make some changes there as present conditions in Russia and Ukraine have changed and my story commenced in these two countries as well as in India.
Hello everyone, I have started writing again. Since I started working it became practically impossible for me to post chapters, as I was getting home around 8 p.m. daily and was not in a position to do anything. Now, I am free again and have picked up the threads of the story and wish to finish the story it within 2-3 months. Chapter 147 posted just now shows the Earthlings meeting the members of the Administrative Council on the Mother Ship as it heads to Titan.
Thanks everyone for being patient. I will start the second volume probably from Mid December 2020.
The story is interesting and is developing well. I found it a bit confusing in the early chapters, as the Main female lead seems to be having mental issues. The Characer Design is good. Not many characters yet but the main Male lead with the purple eyes seems interesting. Who he is, will be revealed in later chapters, I suppose. World background is good in so far as the present scenario is concerned. I have reached the 18th Chapter but I do not find the synopsis tallying with the story. Maybe later on the synopsis will reflect the story. The stability of updates seems good too and the writing quality is ok. However, if you are writing in the first person, i.e. you are the main character, then stick to the first person. But if you are the narrator then write about the characters in the third person, then stick to that style. Please don't mix the two. This is the first time that I am reading a book with lots of emotions. Nice change. I will be watching out for the rest of the story. The book is in my library and further chapters are awaited. All the best, Author!
Why did you leave ...is a question ?
Quite an interesting start. I startedreading, stopped for a break and found that I had read 8 chapters. The writing quality is good. I did not find anything to complain about. The stability of updates is ok since 29 chapters have already been published. The story is developing well. The Character design is good too and I love the dragon :) .The world background is well described. Your book is saved in my library and I will definitely read it. I would recommend it to readers too. All the best, Author!
Captivating chapters.
The novel has a good plot and promises to be an interesting read. I prefer to give honest reviews, so here goes :- I have read 5 chapters so far. The story is developing nicely. The stability of updates is good as I can see 28 chapters have been published. The character design is developing ok. Ava and Ben are (Chapter 5) still mysterious people. World background is equally good. Each chapter stops at a cliff hanger. The only thing that needs a relook are the grammar and proof reading, before posting. A few mistakes do not interfere with the flow of the novel but too many are not good. We all make mistakes, even I do. I would suggest that you download a grammarly or run your text through an online grammar checker. Please reread your chapter before posting. This is called proof reading or you can ask someone to read it for you. Writers sometimes do not see the obvious mistakes. I will be reading your book as it is saved in my library. All the best, Author!
Who is Ben? Again a cliff hanger :)
...went looking for Ben.....