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RenuKakkar

RenuKakkar

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A poetess ( Poemhunter.com) & a published Author (Granny's Return from Heaven as an Incredible Car). I write articles, do numerology & palmistry. I am a Divine Reiki Master.

2018-09-14 JoinedIndia
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar1yr
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    Sorry readers. I have been offline for quite a while as I was not able to handle late working hours and my writing together. Now, there is no job and I would like to complete this Book by the end of July 2022 at the earliers by posting 1 or 2 chapters in a week.

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    Born Again
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar1yr
    Replied to Yggdrasil_

    Thank you for the interest in the novel. Please continue reading and give your suggestions in the comments so that I can further develop the story. I am writing another novel called,'Born Again' which is on past life regression. Have a look at that too. I need to make some changes there as present conditions in Russia and Ukraine have changed and my story commenced in these two countries as well as in India.

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    Trapped in Time
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar1yr
    Posted

    Hello everyone, I have started writing again. Since I started working it became practically impossible for me to post chapters, as I was getting home around 8 p.m. daily and was not in a position to do anything. Now, I am free again and have picked up the threads of the story and wish to finish the story it within 2-3 months. Chapter 147 posted just now shows the Earthlings meeting the members of the Administrative Council on the Mother Ship as it heads to Titan.

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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar2yr
    Replied to babyljaie46

    Yes, maybe one day I will complete it and make it into an autobiography. People can read when I am no longer there :)

    Ch 7 Meeting A Spiritual Being Again
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    Travellers Among the Stars
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Replied to Kamatis

    Thank you for the review. The novel is not yet complete. It is progressing towards completion. Hopefully by 75 the chapter I will be able to tie up all the loose strings and complete it. I do not want to drag a story unnecessarily.

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    Born Again
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Posted

    Hello everyone. Sorry, I have been away so long. This is to inform you all my readers that I have started volume II of this novel. One chapter has already been posted. Chapter 133.

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    Trapped in Time
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Commented

    Thanks everyone for being patient. I will start the second volume probably from Mid December 2020.

    Thanks everyone for being patient. I will start the second volume probably from Mid December 2020.
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Replied to Its_anami

    ok, Will look into that.

    Ch 50 Discussion on the Past Life Session
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    Born Again
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Replied to Vidit_Verma

    Thank you. Hoping to shift all the characters to the place where it all started. I want to wind up by 75th chapter. So that I can get back to my science fiction book called, Trapped in Time' volume 2.

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    Born Again
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Replied to _AiRen_

    Thank you

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    Born Again
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Posted

    The story is interesting and is developing well. I found it a bit confusing in the early chapters, as the Main female lead seems to be having mental issues. The Characer Design is good. Not many characters yet but the main Male lead with the purple eyes seems interesting. Who he is, will be revealed in later chapters, I suppose. World background is good in so far as the present scenario is concerned. I have reached the 18th Chapter but I do not find the synopsis tallying with the story. Maybe later on the synopsis will reflect the story. The stability of updates seems good too and the writing quality is ok. However, if you are writing in the first person, i.e. you are the main character, then stick to the first person. But if you are the narrator then write about the characters in the third person, then stick to that style. Please don't mix the two. This is the first time that I am reading a book with lots of emotions. Nice change. I will be watching out for the rest of the story. The book is in my library and further chapters are awaited. All the best, Author!

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    The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Commented

    A depressing start, but early days. Lets see what happens next.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Commented

    Why did you leave ...is a question ?

    Why did you leave...
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    The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Posted

    Quite an interesting start. I startedreading, stopped for a break and found that I had read 8 chapters. The writing quality is good. I did not find anything to complain about. The stability of updates is ok since 29 chapters have already been published. The story is developing well. The Character design is good too and I love the dragon :) .The world background is well described. Your book is saved in my library and I will definitely read it. I would recommend it to readers too. All the best, Author!

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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Commented

    Captivating chapters.

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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Replied to Kystal88

    Thank you.

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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Posted

    The novel has a good plot and promises to be an interesting read. I prefer to give honest reviews, so here goes :- I have read 5 chapters so far. The story is developing nicely. The stability of updates is good as I can see 28 chapters have been published. The character design is developing ok. Ava and Ben are (Chapter 5) still mysterious people. World background is equally good. Each chapter stops at a cliff hanger. The only thing that needs a relook are the grammar and proof reading, before posting. A few mistakes do not interfere with the flow of the novel but too many are not good. We all make mistakes, even I do. I would suggest that you download a grammarly or run your text through an online grammar checker. Please reread your chapter before posting. This is called proof reading or you can ask someone to read it for you. Writers sometimes do not see the obvious mistakes. I will be reading your book as it is saved in my library. All the best, Author!

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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Commented

    Interesting

    Ch 5 This Can't be Real
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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Commented

    Who is Ben? Again a cliff hanger :)

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  • RenuKakkar
    RenuKakkar3yr
    Commented

    ...went looking for Ben.....

    After the school got over I went to Ben but couldn't find him maybe he had left for his residence before I could reach him.
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