For the most, I enjoyed this story. I did feel like the story was a bit not related to the main plot in the second chapter, but it was a background plot and I could understand that. The MC is different than most male MCs. and the thing I'm most happy about is that it is not a harem. As a fellow author, I would only advise if you'd like to focus on using less run-on sentences. I noticed a lot of those, but to me personally, it wasn't a huge problem.
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