The_Procrastinator
A good story to read that is light and fits the comedy and slice of life tags more than more serious ones. The system is not obnoxious and the main character is not naive or on the moral high ground. Aside from a few grammatical errors in earlier chapter like the lack of capitalization of I the it is not that bad but still could use some touch ups. The one other sticking point I had was the length of the chapters with a large amount being around 500-600 words or less which makes the story feel choppy. Overall I would recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys cultivation novels, a OP main character, and idle gaming systems.
I'm going to start of saying that this is very captivating for a system novel. What went right for me is how you didn't miss out the little details of a system, like features that are progressively unlocked with levelling up and special skills that don't exist in other contexts. I do think you would have benefitted from providing more world building and a description of the main character, or rather, his form as Lu Chen. I think you might have been slightly overkill with the use of onomatopoeia such as "BOINK" as it got slightly frustrating to read and I personally wasn't fond of the way the character was initially introduced in the first three chapters. Additionally, there are a couple of notable areas with grammar issues, mainly capitalisation but it's mostly made up with the evocative vocabulary. He does have some good sides though, the parts about being helplessly curious, etc. Pleasant read! :D
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