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Becoming the Hokage in the beginning

Author: Gfdsa
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What is Becoming the Hokage in the beginning

Read Becoming the Hokage in the beginning fanfiction written by the author Gfdsa on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, adventure, reincarnation, r18, harem. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Mc with a mission on his shoulder went to Naruto world and took over the body of Sarutobi Hiruzen just before the death of Tobirama Senju. As Hiruzen became the Kage of his village, his mission forced him to find a quick way to make him and subordinates stronger in order to fight against his future enemy. So, using one of his cheats, Hiruzen opened spatial passage leading to One piece world and took all the Konoha ninjas there in order to make them stronger. Hiruzen resurrected the legendary figures and created the Akatsuki organization to reach his goal. He even sent ninjas to infiltrate the world government and other four major villages to control those superpowers from inside. After decades of hard work and challenges, Hiruzen was finally successful in conquering both worlds and complete his mission and managed to go to the place he always desired. But this time he didn't go there alone, he brought along those wives that he married during his mission in those two worlds with him as well. ***⚠ Warning⚠*** #If you want the story to be perfect, this is not for you since I am a new writer. #This fanfiction contains harem and some lemon from time to time. If you have any problem with these or you can't stand when there is a big age gap between partners, then you should leave right now instead of wasting your time here. #Overall, if you are a person who doesn't like something as long as it goes against your worldview, then please leave. I am literally tired of those guys who likes to give low reviews just because they don't like something and judge the whole ff only based on that particular part. By the way, I am posting this ff on both webnovel and scribblehub.

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Fanfic_Lovers
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khirigaya_kazuto
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Winter_Whisperer
Winter_WhispererLv4Winter_Whisperer

My warning for new readers is that there is a lot of BS in this. I understand what the author was trying to do in the introduction but the execution was just plain awful. The timeline is messed up. And political marriage needs a bit more convincing.

SHAUN_SEGOKGO_4464
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LG1
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Daolord777
Daolord777Lv11Daolord777

Amazing concept for a story. The charctar development is great and the power level are well thought out many people usually make konoha weak during its foundation forgetting that many people from the warring period are alive and the senju and uchiha are at their peak The world background is also stable and without weird stuff forcibly put into the world so far im looking forward to see the development

The_Zen_Boy
The_Zen_BoyLv4The_Zen_Boy

all in all a good read with a new concept , i also realized some things related to islam and tbh it's interesting that you made the prologue out of it cuz this is the first ... i think ? and the MC is not dump and a pushover so it's good cuz i guess ... the only problem is that it's a little fast paced and there are not many character screens like for example he met luffy but there was not any interactions between them , you just time skipped that scene and some others .

Newnoob
NewnoobLv4Newnoob

After reading the synopsis I think the fic has potential. Never seen an hiruzen si fic, so it's a first for me. Also I see some idiots spamming low reviews just caz it's harem. So......

R_T66
R_T66Lv2R_T66

Ok, I listened to the author about the unfair assessment. And I will appreciate the work. I'm still unhappy with the harem sheet and recommend removing it, otherwise there will be the same problems as with me.

Daughterofwu
DaughterofwuLv3Daughterofwu

I HATE HAREM! BUT I like how MC transmigates into Hiruzen Sarutobi. I like how it's pre cannon and set at the beginning of when he becomes Hokage. But seriously though there's not many Hiruzen Sarutobi fanfictions set at this time or at the beginning when Konoha was established (if there is please share). Anyways can't wait for further development of the village and the exploration of One Piece world. Can't wait for the next update.

Mridul_Turjjo
Mridul_TurjjoLv1Mridul_Turjjo

My friend introduced me to this story, he recommended me to read this awesome story. I am really glad that he did introduced me to this amazing story. i really loved it. One of the best fan-fiction i have ever read.[img=recommend]👌much love.💜💗.

Gabichu_Yeah
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This story deserves more rating, don't be swayed by negative reviews, this story is worth it. Hopefully one day the author will finish it .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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david_cuenca
david_cuencaLv2david_cuenca

woo está increíble jaja , es la primera historia que leo en donde el protagonista es sarutobi hiruzen , además tiene un comienzo de 10 , ya que es cuándo asume el puesto de tercer hokage y lo mejor es que es harém jaja

God_shiva98
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Mr_Compress
Mr_CompressLv3Mr_Compress

One word Awesome .

Jhonathan_Carrasco
Jhonathan_CarrascoLv4Jhonathan_Carrasco

I really love this story so please keep it up.!

Sillas_Emanuel
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Infinite999
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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11hero4hire

Lack of any real story or plotline, author just gives you point by point highlight instead of actually telling you what happen. Eg: Hokage introudced policies that makes civilian and clan respect and loyal to him, Hokage fixed his students personality defects. Hokage discuss with other kage and end the shinobi war. How you ask? No idea, he just did it and you have accept it and move on.

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