Review Detail of khirigaya_kazuto in Becoming the Hokage in the beginning

Wow. Just because of the mistake that I forgot to specify the conditions more clearly, you decided to give this ff 1 star without bothering to read a few more chapters. Moreover, you are calling me stupid because of some simple mistake in a ff. Do you really think yourself as someone who has always been perfect in your life and so you are allowed to call others stupid just because of things that you don't like! I actually don't care what kind of review you give me but at least be honest and make an overall review after reading a reasonable amount of chapters.

Tobirama at that point was more useful than madara since tobirama HAS LEADERSHIP SKILLS unlike madara

Uh huh , the same make konoha great again Tobirama Senju, surely an example pf a great leader is to marginalize the strongest group in konoha

when I first read it the only rule was 'they have to be alive' and saw them as a moron. and as of now there is a new condition added that is basically 'no otsutsuki' and it feels like it was added specifically because people where calling the Mc a moron.

yep I did add that part later. I wanted to edit the whole chapter tbh but considering that the paragraph comments would disappear with that as well, I decided not to.

You care more about paragraph comments than to fix your story? Thats sad.

I know what you are trying to imply here but if you have really looked at the paragraph comments, you would have found most of them are negative in early few chapters. So, I would be more than happy to delete those. But if I do that, I am sure some trolls will start spamming 1 star reviews. So in order to avoid as much drama as possible, I left it as it is. Not to mention, there is no guarantee that people will stop giving negative comments and reviews even if I do edit a few things here and there and make the story better. So why should I bother spending my extra time and energy doing some thankless thing! Those who don't like this ff for whatever reason, they will always find some things to discredit it. As for those who likes it, they are going to stay even if they find some mistakes here and there.

Fair enough, but i dont really see how it's a thankless thing, when a author strives to improve they go back and fix as many mistakes as possible, sure the previous people who commented hate stuff will hate it but whats to say newer readers wont love it? I guess if you only go about trying to please everyone instead of actually trying to improve for your own sake and perhaps for future novels then ok.

It is very demotivating when you see a lots of people giving negative reviews and comments. There were even times when I wanted to just stop writing altogether. Though somehow, I managed to persist after getting used to those kind of things. Anyway, since you suggested, I will try to edit all of the mistakes that I have found in those chapters. But that might take a while since I am quite busy this semester with all the studies in my varsity.

I feel you on the negative reviews killing motivation, also no rush man you're writing this for free so I'd say studies are more important and to only do it when you truly have time, no need to stress it out

True, Tobiraba although he did many good things, he was also a narrow-minded person, the Uchiha are an example