Reviews of Beasts: Reborn
Beasts: Reborn
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short review:Well written, original world building(powers, clans ...), slow paced (which can be good or bad for you depending on your preference), the author seems really passionate about his story, it's completely free and I genuinely can't find a criticism for these book.Definitely worth reading and deserves way more recognition in this app.
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Well. Here I am again at the end of another Volume! Feels good, I’m excited to keep building this world I’ve made. Now, for those interested in reading and scrolling through the reviews, allow me to come with some hard hitting realism once more. I have grown from the first volume and the end of the second. But I’m still not where I want to be as a writer. There’s still cringe moments, I’ve learned I have a tendency to mystery load that can become exhausting to a reader very quickly and I dilluted this story with a lot of heavy darkness. Naturally, it’s a dark story, but it should come in waves and be reasonable. TDLR I have room to grow, and I know exactly what I need to do. So, is this a good read? Like I said before, not at first, but it gets better and it will continue to. It’s all about your own tolerance which I cannot gauge. Anyway if this review led you astray and you find that you still don’t like the story, come back and tell me why. Help a brother grow fr 🙏 Also, some guy named Lucifersrevenge left a really goood realistic review but I can’t seem to see it so go off that if you can.
Your novel is literally my favorite book I have ever read. The way you show the troubles and hardship one must face in their day-to-day lives is what I love most. When I am reading I feel the anxiaty of the main character, when he loses I lose and when he wins I celebrate with him. You're gonna go far and I can't wait to see more of this book. You are 400 chapters in this book and I hope I see many more. When you are stressed take breaks so you can be refreshed and don't let it weigh you down. I like how Claude stays focused even when the world is falling. He has made it far and I am happy to be there to witness his rise. This is the type of book others could learn from due to the way you get an in depth look upon Claude. The way he deals with stress, what's on his mind, his plans, his fears and many more. I love what you do and keep it up.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. All in all Happy One Mill
This novel is a breath of fresh air on this site. The storytelling is very well done, you can see there is a plan throughout. There are also quality descriptions, a rarity on Webnovel and something the author has executed brilliantly, though sometimes they can be fairly lengthy, this is however managed by the long chapter lengths so you still get content. The characters are diverse and interesting, they all have their own stories and motivations to explore. The world building relies on established myth e.g. Fenrir from Norse mythology, set in a regressed post apocalyptic society but the myths are given their own twist to liven up the story and keep you guessing. The author does tend to have some issues with pacing especially in the earlier parts and there are chunks of poetic imagery which can slow the reading down but these are kept out of high octane action scenes and are usually kept in reflective chapters. Additionally, Claude (MC) does spend a long time in varying levels of self-hatred but is finally growing out of that circa 360 to embrace the rich heritage he finds himself a part of and the circumstances he has found himself in. This isn’t to say he refuses to act just that his attitude and choices reflect this Some small grammar mistakes your vs you’re etc. But still they are very minor and don’t impact the flow too much, however the language can get very verbose which could be an issue for people who have difficulty with English. Overall a great read that I would strongly recommend, with quality fitting a published novel it should definitely be up there with the big names on this site and maybe beyond…
Welp. I think it’s time to write another review at the end of my first volume. Almost a year later. Crazy fr. Anyway, for those that are looking through the reviews and wondering if this novel is worth a read let me tell you rigjt now. I’ll try to be as real as possible, it is— but not at the start. if we’re being honest, my writing in the start sucks. A lot of repetive words and sentences, a couple spelling errors and a little cringe. Maybe more than a little cringe tbh. But, i grow. I dont become shakespeare or anything but my progress is visible in many areas. Some of the main ones being; my ability to paint pictures and describe sceneries as well as make character interactions fluid and designs original. Both of which could be debatable but I digress. Also, my world design is very original and not crazy or complex and something you’ll learn more of naturally. I will say though, the novel can feel slow at times, something i plan to fix in volume 2. So, by now if you read this, hopefully all the faults ive stated are fixed to some degree. If you still find that you dont enjoy it then I wish you happy reading elsewhere. Dang im rambling. Anyway feel free to ask any questions i’ll try to answer wothoht too much spoiling.