Review Detail of _Avatar0FFury_ in Beasts: Reborn

Well. Here I am again at the end of another Volume! Feels good, I’m excited to keep building this world I’ve made. Now, for those interested in reading and scrolling through the reviews, allow me to come with some hard hitting realism once more. I have grown from the first volume and the end of the second. But I’m still not where I want to be as a writer. There’s still cringe moments, I’ve learned I have a tendency to mystery load that can become exhausting to a reader very quickly and I dilluted this story with a lot of heavy darkness. Naturally, it’s a dark story, but it should come in waves and be reasonable. TDLR I have room to grow, and I know exactly what I need to do. So, is this a good read? Like I said before, not at first, but it gets better and it will continue to. It’s all about your own tolerance which I cannot gauge. Anyway if this review led you astray and you find that you still don’t like the story, come back and tell me why. Help a brother grow fr 🙏 Also, some guy named Lucifersrevenge left a really goood realistic review but I can’t seem to see it so go off that if you can.