Review Detail of _Avatar0FFury_ in Beasts: Reborn

Welp. I think it’s time to write another review at the end of my first volume. Almost a year later. Crazy fr. Anyway, for those that are looking through the reviews and wondering if this novel is worth a read let me tell you rigjt now. I’ll try to be as real as possible, it is— but not at the start. if we’re being honest, my writing in the start sucks. A lot of repetive words and sentences, a couple spelling errors and a little cringe. Maybe more than a little cringe tbh. But, i grow. I dont become shakespeare or anything but my progress is visible in many areas. Some of the main ones being; my ability to paint pictures and describe sceneries as well as make character interactions fluid and designs original. Both of which could be debatable but I digress. Also, my world design is very original and not crazy or complex and something you’ll learn more of naturally. I will say though, the novel can feel slow at times, something i plan to fix in volume 2. So, by now if you read this, hopefully all the faults ive stated are fixed to some degree. If you still find that you dont enjoy it then I wish you happy reading elsewhere. Dang im rambling. Anyway feel free to ask any questions i’ll try to answer wothoht too much spoiling.