TheAdventurer
Extremely inconsistent pacing. There's absolutely no build up to events, no motivation explained, nor any indicative description - instead, this novel just skips through entire scenarios, somehow expecting the reader to connect the dots. If that wasn't enough, the story rapidly changes direction. One minute it's an empire destroying catastrophe, next minute the MC is in love with a women, and announcing to the world that she's his wife. Of course, if that wasn't enough there's suddenly a dozen chapters of MC and Natalie's love story. The author has a horrible tendency of wish-fulfillment, it's evident from how randomly the fe-tis-hes are thrown into the story. Completing ruining a prospective marvel. Sad. Comment might be deleted.
I had to admit that the story was quite strange at the beginning stages, but still. Since the author promised that he will improve, there's no other choice but to trust him since he's the writer, I just want to see the birth of a decent writer, not exactly excellent like Tang Jia San Shao or Er Gen.
the story had the potential with assassination system but mc a normal person in previous life fighting to death with previous assasins all bloody and where did he get his stealth skill when he was in enemy commander room who was supposedly spirt realm and killed him but it took so much effort to kill organ tempering realm the realms in this are mostly decorations and despite having the system mc is still the trash with his pathetic cultivation
Ask yourself this question...you first enter a new world with a system... Wats the first thing that you do...? lo and behold..our dear MC/author decided that the first thing to do is read up about cultivation and history with the help of the system he doesn't know anything about...he didn't even check it's functions until a couple of days later after almost dying... I'm sorry author San but I can never recommend your book to anyone...you didn't put to much thought into it...juts lackadaisical... This story is not logical at all...when I saw the name ...I was really looking forward to reading it but I have not even gone far but I know I will be disappointed...πππ
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