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Assassination System

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Devin_Lin
Devin_LinLv4Devin_Lin

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drakos
drakosLv4drakos

It is hilarious and very great wish it had more chapters )lllkkihdhdsheyelueitwoysjraskysgsfsggsiteylatoeysosydgZgzgxgoxoydfiesottwyowotstoskgskgxh

InHisName
InHisNameLv6InHisName

Extremely inconsistent pacing. There's absolutely no build up to events, no motivation explained, nor any indicative description - instead, this novel just skips through entire scenarios, somehow expecting the reader to connect the dots. If that wasn't enough, the story rapidly changes direction. One minute it's an empire destroying catastrophe, next minute the MC is in love with a women, and announcing to the world that she's his wife. Of course, if that wasn't enough there's suddenly a dozen chapters of MC and Natalie's love story. The author has a horrible tendency of wish-fulfillment, it's evident from how randomly the fe-tis-hes are thrown into the story. Completing ruining a prospective marvel. Sad. Comment might be deleted.

Pockster
PocksterLv13Pockster

Fking loving so far 😍 :) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) does it contain 140 characters yet?

OvercookedBalut
OvercookedBalutLv4OvercookedBalut

I had to admit that the story was quite strange at the beginning stages, but still. Since the author promised that he will improve, there's no other choice but to trust him since he's the writer, I just want to see the birth of a decent writer, not exactly excellent like Tang Jia San Shao or Er Gen.

RamenWarlord
RamenWarlordLv5RamenWarlord

Do you want to read a System Story? Do you want to read a story with an MC? Then, you came into the right place, this story has both a system and an MC! Alexa play anime weeb music.

MrBanks2128
MrBanks2128Lv13MrBanks2128

This story is growong slowly and I've already become addicted lol but where are the chapters??? I want more!!! Keep writing and keep growing as a writer. You have an amazing talent.

Ruthkiin
RuthkiinLv5Ruthkiin

Much better then the original in my opinion, and I quiet enjoy the writing style as well. Will have to see how the story is fleshed out but all in all it great so far.

Snake551g
Snake551gLv12Snake551g

Bit sad your restarting but props to you for sticking by your readers. I can't wait to see the improvements you've made for the story. Thanks for the hard work and caring for the readers!

Hitesh_Yadav_2510
Hitesh_Yadav_2510Lv2Hitesh_Yadav_2510

the story had the potential with assassination system but mc a normal person in previous life fighting to death with previous assasins all bloody and where did he get his stealth skill when he was in enemy commander room who was supposedly spirt realm and killed him but it took so much effort to kill organ tempering realm the realms in this are mostly decorations and despite having the system mc is still the trash with his pathetic cultivation

DanversVictor
DanversVictorLv4DanversVictor

Ask yourself this question...you first enter a new world with a system... Wats the first thing that you do...? lo and behold..our dear MC/author decided that the first thing to do is read up about cultivation and history with the help of the system he doesn't know anything about...he didn't even check it's functions until a couple of days later after almost dying... I'm sorry author San but I can never recommend your book to anyone...you didn't put to much thought into it...juts lackadaisical... This story is not logical at all...when I saw the name ...I was really looking forward to reading it but I have not even gone far but I know I will be disappointed...πŸ˜‘πŸ˜žπŸ˜ž

Yokubo
YokuboLv11Yokubo

Reveal spoiler

Seurge_Junior
Seurge_JuniorLv5Seurge_Junior

I have dropped it, the principal reason is : for an assassination systèm there is a single assassination, just a single one ! In 177 chapter ! (or at least from the mc). There is kill, sure, but not assassination.

MiniBang
MiniBangLv5MiniBang

Hooked by novel description but After 10 chapters i feel cheated, the story and characters just don't make any sense, they are just dropped from nowhere without any kind of logic

Betterdays
BetterdaysLv10Betterdays

Honestly needs a lot of work in my opinion, grammar isn't great and it's lacking a rather interesting plot (it's mainstream). Anyways wouldn't rec sadly to anybody I know even though I know how difficult being an author is.

CZPyrite
CZPyriteLv10CZPyrite

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Lord_Farquaad341
Lord_Farquaad341Lv10Lord_Farquaad341

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ghost_9609
ghost_9609Lv3ghost_9609

Amazing. Gr8 development

MRay1_4
MRay1_4Lv2MRay1_4

Well there were some parts that didnt make the slightest sense and it lacked explanation. .

JRT02
JRT02Lv14JRT02

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