UltimateSenpai
am I the only one or the chapters have been deleted? chapter and the other is the same but I will always be good to go upper and back in my thought while looking around him to the home to make it look good state we were the best name to remember to do but we didn't win any more than me so I am not going if I want I don't want any of you to enter to be educated or to
The story and premise are great. The MC is dog water trash. made by some Chinese kid who doesn't have a social life so has no idea what talking to other humans is actually like. the grammar is subpar. almost not worth attempting to read it but still passable enough to at least see where the story heads. a lot to be desired. if this author had an editor and someone who knew how social interaction worked then this story would be awesome, sadly thats not the case. I can say for sure that this author has never had a girlfriend.
Primero que todo, el MC es aburrido sinceramente, a pesar de tener un sistema y ganar habilidades, no hace nada con ellas en su mundo, le gusta mas pasar entre hombres jugando futbol. Luego de que dejo a su novia(normal) despues de 100 capitulos... Solo puedo decir que mi calificiacion de esta novela seguira bajando asi como vamos :/ Los personajes en el chat estan bien caracterizados, pero a pesar de que Kakashi conoce su historia y como murio su padre, no tiene ningun deseo de venganza contra konoha? o esos viejos al mando? lo cual seria bueno enfocarse en como afecta a los personajes conocer su historia. Ademas el sistema de esta novela es uno de los mas jodidos que he visto, si bien te dan diferentes habilidades como recompensa, no las puedes usar ya que cuando comienza una mision te bloquean todos los poderes sobrenaturales -.- autor si vas a bloquear poderes solo para que el MC que tiene mas variedad pueda ir a la mision no lo hagas, ya que el MC no tendria proposito en entrenar sus poderes salvo que sean habilidades basicas de supervivencia...
I'm going to be completely honest when I first started reading the book I dropped it what in the first couple chapters but I said hey I enjoyed the other books from the author so let's just give the author of benefit of the doubt and finish the book after I came back and started reading the book I found that I actually enjoyed it the character development after like a couple of chapters actually started getting good I would recommend the book but to those who are going to read it I strongly advise you to just continue reading I know some parts of the book at first may not make any sense but keep reading and it actually become enjoyableoh unto the author I need more chapters thank you very much[img=update]