Reviews of Anime Mashup: Multiverse Traveling Merchant

Did you write this or is this a mtl just wondering

Gonna be honest, I only read up to chapter 2 and that was...painful? The chapter title had a spelling mistake. How does your chapter title have grammatical errors. If anyone says it gets better, I'll try to revisit this, but for now imma just dip out while I still have all of my braincells

first this novel is read like a chinese one which was just thrown into an mtl and done. As for the story it seems ok but nothing new, for updates it is in the normal western standard but slow if it where a chinese writer. As for the reading experience it is horrible, there are some cases where it is using the chinese name of something or someone which confuse readers, also the same is happening with the build up of the sentences, sometime I just don't know what I just read. All together is seems like a chinese translated WN which Title was changed so that one can't find the original source. If I'm wrong with my guess, then the reason is that this novel is to similar to chinese novels which was just thrown into an MTL

it's painful of read that's all i can say read at your own risk

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please tell the original title TellMeTellMe

Strongest​ confuse poison​ mtl story#Death

Doesn't even deserve a tenth of the attention it has gotten, the only reason it has is because the are so few decent system/multiverse/shop stories out their and the readers checked it out only to be brought in for a world of disappointment. No background on MC, spelling and grammar are out right terrible (not saying once every few chapters, but quite a few times repeatedly throughout each chapter), the guy beats Mihawk in Chapter 2 and was given Yoru (name of Mihawk's sword) and also to the swords of Gol D Roger and Shanks. When I started reading this, I had a bit of hope that it would be good. But everyone who actually reads the reviews before the actual story, the only thing I have to say to you is "Don't bother, it's not worth your time".

it gives me a good read, got nothing to read at the moment

The only negative aspect its the grammar in itself (and thats me being a non native english speaker) besides that is a very interesting concept that carries very hard (with grammar mistakes i do refer stuff like calling kurenai "hong" or ayame "iris" and those are some lighter examples)

Reveal spoiler

It's a great and interesting anime mash up fanfiction!! 😍 It have a good and interesting story/plot, but the translate/english is bad.. And what is MC name?? Luo or Xin?? I like the idea about store in anime multiverse.. I understand that MC have to be strong to protect his store.. I want to know author san.. Why it always a half story in every world.. Like he start in One Piece, but change world after beat Mihawk and get his sword,, then he go to Naruto and change again before Danzo caught and be punished,, the Akame ga Kill world is ok,, and Fairy Tail world is ok too (at least there's not unfinished story there).. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍