Didn't you retcon Bonney's existence when Rob was last speaking to Roger?

The word you're looking for is Ahego, Ahoge is an anime cowlick. You know, that strand that stands up no matter what.

For dexterity +250,000, I thought you would have put "Ludicrous Speed" as a Spaceballs reference since Mel Brooks is finally starring that sequel

Just 4 chapters till Hell breaks loose.

Yeah, overstepped way to soon. Should've waited until he managed to ditch the V-Card before digging into her personal life.

Star Magic and a glamorous bathroom, makes me think of Stolas from Helluva Boss.

Zeref: "This shall be my gift to no one, Mavis, a brand new world purified and sweet." Mavis: "I assume that there will be fighting." Zeref: "Not quite... More like in one-sided annihilation; not a man, woman or child will be spared."

Can't wait for the next Whitebeard scenes. (Couldn't find the right GIF for when he send hundreds of marines flying 5 miles in the air)

I'd disagree

Seriously, it's copy and paste with very little editing. I know you said it's based on that fanfic, but this is disappointing.

Yeah, the whole Mavis thing and her already knowing him was a bit much.

I feel like you cut & paste from the fanfic "The Essence Of Fairy Tail", the one where the MC has a magic that can buy and sell anything without it being a system.

Sad as it is, it's mostly because most of the cast are guys unless we count the monsters.