Young_Master_Jay
My only question is if there will be a harem, I mean, he's a god, I think it's necessary. I add the other star if positive. I saw that in your previous novel there was a harem label. By the way, I have not read your previous novel because it seems that the main character was not dominated despite controlling destiny.
I have you 5 stars for the world background because when I was reading, I could easily picture the world in which our MC lives in. I also noticed that you paid attention to things like grammar and sentence structure so it was lovely to read each chapter. This novel has potential so I hope you'll keep working hard and doing your best.
A uniquely told and well written novel. So compelling, the reader won’t be able to put it down. The god of life and death is an intriging main character with a lot of impressive power. And the way it’s described, down to the philosophy of it is in itself compelling. The further the reader goes, the more intense it gets. A must read.
The words used to describe the world and the events that take in place in it are wonderful and filled with so much fantastical whim. I really liked how much time you used to describe the city of festivities, however, I did find that many of the things that used to describe are repeated several times but are just phrased differently and could do with a trim of the excess.