Emmanuel_Peter203
could the author stick to Third person POV? In my personal opinion, when the pov is on the mc, he tends to overthink which I end skipping the content till I get to the part where he's actually doing something. If that's not possible, then atleast the author tries to improve on it.The overall story is getting better, by the way.
kind author i enjoyed your story so much i just appreciate it if you don't add a lot of dialogues that of no value to the narration and very annoying e.g. someone did something then ace wondered what he meant and turned to question him but he explained before he spoke why don't directly make him explain honestly it's annoying
We are almost at a hundred chapter guys! I really appreciate the support y'all have given me till now and I hope we'll be together to see through this journey. I'll drop another review when the novel reaches a hundred chapter and address some of the issues the readers pointed out. Thanks for reading.