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Omar_Raie_20961yrPostedkind author i enjoyed your story so much i just appreciate it if you don't add a lot of dialogues that of no value to the narration and very annoying e.g. someone did something then ace wondered what he meant and turned to question him but he explained before he spoke why don't directly make him explain honestly it's annoying
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at least not sword like eyebrows
He didn't dare believe it. How did this happen? He looked exactly like the game character in his game. He looked to be 18 years in age with long black hair with two dashing eyebrows which made him look too handsome. He was wearing the same white cloak with black pants. Inside the cloak was a white vest and he was wearing the same black boots. But he didn't have the inventory items that he used to fight the final boss.