Reviews of A Space Whale in the MonsterVerse (AU)
A Space Whale in the MonsterVerse (AU)
The_Bip_Boop2003
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Good book, great author. Itβs a good book for passing the time and the author seems really down to earth and almost always respond to comments. Only real complaint is how time consuming it is liking all the good chapter comments.
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I really enjoyed reading this fanfic. Writing quality is good except the messy point of views sometimes. In general, the author is able pique readers interest and a job well done on the story progression. I would like to suggest on one little thing like the switching of PoV's. I know it can be improved can be improved. Directly indicating the change of pov is a good way too but it sometimes kill the momentum of the story. What I mean is, if the author can seamlessly change pov's without disturbing the story dynamics in each chapter then I would even pay to read this fanfic.. I wish the author to stay well and hope you won't stop your passion for writing. Hope this somewhat help you and hope you improve your writing/storytelling skills. Cheers
This is an enjoyable read, good writing and finally an mc which doesn't, as an moster, directly want to become human again and act like a human most of the time. You, random reader reading this review won't be disappointed reading this work but be aware that this isn't a fanfic where the mc goes on murdersprees and that there are quite a number of comedic moments happening. Oh did I tell you guys that our mc is a whale? No? Well ... he is and one big majestic whale he is.
Reviewed as of chp23: TLDR; Recommend. Give it a try and see if you enjoy the humor and MC. The pacing of the plot is rather slow but I think fits perfectly for this story. WQ(4/5)- A few minor mistakes but overall good. The writing itself isn't bland or 'flat', the intend is portrayed well and enjoyable to read. SD(5/5)- Disclaimer I know very little of Toho's monsterverse but the plot and development of the story is focused on our MC and his shenanigans. It slowly introduces other kaijus and uses inspiration from other works(Subnautica, ARK evolved etc). The overarching plot is slowly being fleshed out thus furthering it's mystique. Interested to see what else the author brings out. CD(5/5)- Our MC is mostly calm, calculated and focus on his own endeavours. He also almost completely embraces his more non-human side which makes sense since he's a giant space whale with godlike powers. US(4/5)- Not bad. Nothing much to comment. Author also responds quite frequently with his audience so that's a plus. WB(5/5)- As previously stated, I don't know much about the monsterverse but oh boy I'm enjoying reading about it.
Vary good so far love the way the MC views things he's also a big whale so that's a definite plus the Mc's power doesn't just skyrocket there are good spaces between them and also he doesn't just know hot to use it he gets ideas from the things he has fought he doesn't just get them overall very good even with some of the grammatical errors ( Wwhich there are a few of but that's understandable) would recommend definitely
This one is unusual, he is reincarnated as a Kaiju(giant monster). And really plays to the belief that he is not human anymore. Uses a fair bit of science in it to explain how he is able to do what he does with the power to control gravity. Not complaining I love that kinda stuff. The MC uses his powers to visit other worlds/interact with the multiverse, but I wouldnβt call it a multiverse adventure as he is still situated in the Godzilla-verse.
