Review Detail of LonelySago in A Space Whale in the MonsterVerse (AU)

I really enjoyed reading this fanfic. Writing quality is good except the messy point of views sometimes. In general, the author is able pique readers interest and a job well done on the story progression. I would like to suggest on one little thing like the switching of PoV's. I know it can be improved can be improved. Directly indicating the change of pov is a good way too but it sometimes kill the momentum of the story. What I mean is, if the author can seamlessly change pov's without disturbing the story dynamics in each chapter then I would even pay to read this fanfic.. I wish the author to stay well and hope you won't stop your passion for writing. Hope this somewhat help you and hope you improve your writing/storytelling skills. Cheers