Review Detail of Chance_Zahn in A Space Whale in the MonsterVerse (AU)

Vary good so far love the way the MC views things he's also a big whale so that's a definite plus the Mc's power doesn't just skyrocket there are good spaces between them and also he doesn't just know hot to use it he gets ideas from the things he has fought he doesn't just get them overall very good even with some of the grammatical errors ( Wwhich there are a few of but that's understandable) would recommend definitely