Sweating_Cloud
If you like MC's that are Cultivation Genius's but have ZERO Critical Thinking or Social skills? Then this is the novel for you. As a bonus you have an author that doesn't completely suck at world building or story development. Disclaimer. You might need to take a few painkillers or take a moment to puff puff pass to get through the MC dialogue or what passes for internal thoughts. Like seriously you'll need it!!
Surprisingly, this is an original novel, I didn't really know since I downloaded the book from some other site. Honestly, for an original xianxia novel, this is actually written quite well compared to the stuff one would normally see from aspiring authors like me, and I for one don't understand why people make these downgrading reviews and intentionally exaggerate the bad parts of the novel just to get some self-satisfaction, they can try to make a story for all I care, see how they handle lack of motivation, infrequent updates and unresponsive readers for first starters (don't worry it's common for all writing sites, but still), and their very own downgrading reviews or comments. Not that I know much about all the reviews or comments since I only got one slightly downgrading one. But all in all, the annoyance and slight depression of writing for people who don't even note their presence with a comment. Even if you have thousands of collections, as long as you have no reader interaction, they really won't matter. So, let me stop my internet rant and continue with my work. But at the end, the point of this review is to say that the author did a good job.
There will be some spoiler so beware. So from what i read till the last chapter, the story start off quite slow, then accelerate and it seems to decelerate as of the latest chapter. That's something i like about this story, the rythm keep changing, and i can definitly relate to this. Sometimes life flew by, and sometimes it feels so long. The writing quality is alright, i don't have enough experience to judge this but i like it anyway. The world background is pretty interesting, the world is simple enough, and there are mysteries like humanity that seems to have been reduce to ruins, and it seems that there are only a few settlement left, the mystery about their disappeareasance keep building up till the lastest chapters and i can't wait to learn exactly what happened. The main character is pretty nice, in the eyes of the reader, he's nothing but naive, for humans he's a strong willed boy that sacrifice his life for them, to go explore the world. However as the story progress he turn more and more like a typical cultivation hero, more and more bland, so i hope that the author will be able to bring a tad more of life to him. I think the easiest way for that would be to add some romace, considering the female lead following him it's sounds simple at all. Also, i hope that the earliest character will not be forgotten, considering what he's doing and where he's going in the last chapter, i hope his connexions won't just be erased. Overall i really like this story, the start of the story really got me excited every chapters. But knowing that writting a story is not that easy, i can understand that some point start to decrease in quality. That's why i hope the author will see this and think about it. Conclusion : Great story to read !
Oggi scriverò nella mia lingua madre. Sinceramente ho letto critiche morali che non condivido per nulla. Ci sono novel famose in cui il genocidio è continuo (basta leggere Battle Though the Heavens per rendersene conto o anche su questo sito il buon Birth of the Demoniac Sworld) e onestamente non capisco come si possa scrivere che l’autore deve essere controllato ... Ho letto svariate novel e trovo A Chaotic World veramente ben scritto e sono convinto che se l’autore lo completerà con impegno trasformerà questa novel in un capolavoro. Direte che sono un occidentale e ne capisco poco ma le scene di combattimento di questa novel sono mille volte meglio di quelle del tanto celebrato Legend of Futian, la trama è mille volte meglio dell’insipido ma ultra celebrato Perfect World, i personaggi sono definiti molto meglio di quelli che appaiono troppo uguali tra loro in Ancient Strengthening Tecnique, il ritmo della storia é molto buono e a mio giudizio migliore di quello di Martial God Asura che sconta innumerevoli ripetizioni della scena delle critiche rivolte dalla folla a Chu Feng. Tra le nuove novel (lasciamo fuori i capolavori come Martial World, Desolate Era, Wu Dong Qian Kun) non ho trovato nulla di meglio di A Chaotic World e ben poco che si avvicina (second life ranked). Unica minima pecca la velocità di aggiornamento non eccezionale. Ma per chi come me legge quel capolavoro di Chaotic Sword God in cui gli aggiornamenti sono discontinui e imprevedibili la velocità di rilascio dei capitoli é ancora buona. Per cui complimenti all‘Autore. Continua così. Se siete interessati basta tradurre con Google translate.