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Review Detail of Airye in A Chaotic World

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There will be some spoiler so beware. So from what i read till the last chapter, the story start off quite slow, then accelerate and it seems to decelerate as of the latest chapter. That's something i like about this story, the rythm keep changing, and i can definitly relate to this. Sometimes life flew by, and sometimes it feels so long. The writing quality is alright, i don't have enough experience to judge this but i like it anyway. The world background is pretty interesting, the world is simple enough, and there are mysteries like humanity that seems to have been reduce to ruins, and it seems that there are only a few settlement left, the mystery about their disappeareasance keep building up till the lastest chapters and i can't wait to learn exactly what happened. The main character is pretty nice, in the eyes of the reader, he's nothing but naive, for humans he's a strong willed boy that sacrifice his life for them, to go explore the world. However as the story progress he turn more and more like a typical cultivation hero, more and more bland, so i hope that the author will be able to bring a tad more of life to him. I think the easiest way for that would be to add some romace, considering the female lead following him it's sounds simple at all. Also, i hope that the earliest character will not be forgotten, considering what he's doing and where he's going in the last chapter, i hope his connexions won't just be erased. Overall i really like this story, the start of the story really got me excited every chapters. But knowing that writting a story is not that easy, i can understand that some point start to decrease in quality. That's why i hope the author will see this and think about it. Conclusion : Great story to read !

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A Chaotic World

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