Reviews of A Chance To Become An Adonis
A Chance To Become An Adonis
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- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
I think the author should change the cover of his story, it doesn't look very good, I think with the genres of this story you can find "much better"))
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At first I was frustrated with the MC as his dense with women character was carried over through all the years he was a simp. His revenge plot was trudging along even though you can tell the subtle changes in his personality. But like any other novel fair judgement is made only after the ending. I finished reading this satisfied on how everything turned out. His revenge revealed his growth as a person while giving the antagonist his just desserts. Overall a great read.
man, i was happy at first when i found this novel as it had 400+ chapters to read which was gud to pass my time..but now tht I'm deep in here, it's terrible to see how it takes 9-10 or even more chapters to sort out every little situation our guy gets in with all those unnecessary drama which are supposed to be funny ,but is just all the more stupid to be in the plot of a guy who is supposed to be a little close to the age of my father(mentally). I'm guessing he would have barely crossed 2 weeks by the end of these 400 chapters..which i feel stupid to continue reading on knowing this in short, this was a complete dissapointment ...
writing quality: it's good! no mistakes as far as I remember. story development: slow or just right. well, it's because of that, that the readers gets more attached to the story more! character design: every character has their own personalities. they are not like robots who will show up only when needed. Everyone has a role to play and their personalities are like of that in real life as much as possible. updating stability: This is what I like about the author the most. Although it's not stable but, he updates as much as he can. and he never rushed the story just so that he can update! World background: It's very clear! the families, power, and what's happening is clearly mentioned at the story. HOPE YOU LIKE MY REVIEW!🥰
As the plot starts Lu Chen gets a shock that his wife is still in love with this Long shen, he still couldn't believe it. But he got killed by his wife's man and reincarnated again in his past, still he goes for her till the point reaches where he figures out that Lu Chen controls her like a doll, but still he couldn't figure out the other of his childhood also love him over excessive, that is, Yandere. Such a dense head boy he stiil could acknowledge that he does need that so called previous wife but people who really loves him as a person.
Read it on scribble hub and I got to say that most of the work are great the plot can be annoying sometime and sometime the characters development start to to go back in the new chapter the idea that the main character have mix personalities a vengeful personality of a guy who was kill by the girl he love and another is a simp lord that will lick the ground that the main villainess/heroin(I’m not sure if it true but the plot is leading to a redemption arc for the villainess ) The only thing that i think could be improve is the world development like what is city in which country some world history like how did the the family become so powerful and the character development can be improve by making the character feel more real have them express more emotion and have longer dialogue or some inside thoughts of those character. And the story development is a bit too slow in my opinion but it is still ok each arc is about 5 chapter long and it perfect.
