Review Detail of Wing404 in A Chance To Become An Adonis

Read it on scribble hub and I got to say that most of the work are great the plot can be annoying sometime and sometime the characters development start to to go back in the new chapter the idea that the main character have mix personalities a vengeful personality of a guy who was kill by the girl he love and another is a simp lord that will lick the ground that the main villainess/heroin(I’m not sure if it true but the plot is leading to a redemption arc for the villainess ) The only thing that i think could be improve is the world development like what is city in which country some world history like how did the the family become so powerful and the character development can be improve by making the character feel more real have them express more emotion and have longer dialogue or some inside thoughts of those character. And the story development is a bit too slow in my opinion but it is still ok each arc is about 5 chapter long and it perfect.