Comments of chapter undefined of House Of The Dragon: The Secret Dragon-Lord Of Valyrian's Descent

Interesting story but too few chapters.

It’s an interesting story with a good first chapter thank you author

Thank for the new story

Nothing really to say negative wise. The story has a good start and the story line is very interesting

Thanks for the new story, look forward to seeing another chapter

Great chapter

So many possibilities

Me gustó el capitulo y sobre todo su interacción con los otros personajes espero mucho de este fic y espero ya mas capitulos

I really liked it! It’s so nice to see a fanfic where the timeline is during before the doom since those types of fanfics are dropped, abandoned or very very few.

so far this is good keep it up and i wonder will the dance of the dragon will happen and will they support Rhaenyra

what about her sister will she ever reunited with him in the future?

Hmm, interesting premise so far. Curious about how he will go to house of dragon timeline.

Jaenara isn't going to the future? 🥲

Honestly, I'm quite interested in the story, I'm curious about the development and this first chapter managed to keep me hooked, but I have some points I'd like to highlight.. the lines with the sister and mother were a little strange, with those first words repeating “My~ my son” for example, I understood the idea behind that but it's still a little strange, are they stuttering? and also the way the dialogue with the sister was done I found it a little strange from the beginning of the story, if we have a relationship occurring between them it would be better to first demonstrate that this exists and then show something more intimate, at least that's my opinion In my opinion, I think it’s a bit “aggressive” to show something more intimate on the first impression