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Comments of chapter undefined of Stiles A fanfic for fun

batman_3_3_
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this fic went from good to questionable in one chapter, a few problems are that Lilith can't just go between possessing Allison and not and she's not strong enough to do anything to God or even have enough authority to harm humans, stiles would be able to exercise her easily within a day and make it so nobody gets possessed with dean knowledge and if he has deans memories then dean is dead meaning end of series god being dead as well. adding supernatural out of nowhere makes things complicated and maybe fast paced and Allisons and stiles relationship just being tossed in the trash isn't great either. story had potential but idk anymore, I'll still read till it becomes unbearable but it's also likely to be dropped

Storm2023
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This is supposed to be teen wolf, now it’s supernatural with stiles having dean’s memories and Lilith having a bone to pick with god? This just feels like a mess in the making and so random..