Comments of chapter undefined of Blue Lock - Wild Hunt.
Blue Lock - Wild Hunt.
Rickless1
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KingKarma_1766Lv4KingKarma_1766
tbh it's kind of boring.. the MC is boring barely shows any emotion and the MC is obviously gonna be op and will remove the thrill...
KingKarma_1766Lv4KingKarma_1766
well it's up to you but i assume your just a beginner as a writer... Your gonna have a hard time writing about a mc who is kind of emotionless and make the story awesome or cool at the same time... also tbh with his current abilities he would have already gotten scouted on other foreign clubs...
Rickless1:Yes, he is going to be kinda OP, but that is what I'm going for. I wanted to write something like, "What if Rin Itoshi was in team Z at the start?" I plan on making him the best, and everyone is growing and developing new skills to defeat him, but his is also growing. As for his emotional state, I've thought about that too. he's a loner yes, but he is a strong loner, so he will draw people to him and will slowly but surely open up.
