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KingKarma_176612hReplied to Justice_Of_LoveI don't think you understand.... i mean that Aiku original position was a forward and prioritised teamwork and assist... He changed his position as a df when he lost his passion as a fw and wanted to destroy the fw that the adults keeps mass producing and when a true striker appears he will protect it.
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Aiku was a forward back then
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not strong enough
"I also want the powers of Ichigo's hollow and become a visored" Ken said waiting for the God's response. - KingKarma_17662dCommented
ohhh thanks for this
[A/N: I will not have any complaints. This is only to remind you that I will NOT lock anyone out of my stories. Patreon is ahead by 2 chapters and it will be the only time that is the case. By tomorrow, it will be ahead by more and the next time you see the following chapter, it will be ahead by even more. - KingKarma_17663dReplied to Riger82_8236
that's evil
So if I seal a target, I can change the inside of the pace such as by creating permanent lava lands or storm plains. - KingKarma_17664dCommented
tf is when you do you
"A bit but I always wanted to play so when you do you Rin but I love playing and I will always be playing football so tell me if you and me get on the field we will fight to the end we will be rivals even if you are a year old don't show me any remorse because I will be a better fucking player than you will ever be" - KingKarma_17666dCommented
how tf is this trash banging girls anyway
The plumper man's eyes did a quick sweep around the house, clean, save for the bottles of beer, lacking the usual pants, lipstick, and overall telltale signs of a woman having been here. - KingKarma_17666dReplied to DeityOfSlumber
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i don't have money 🥹
[A/N: This is the last chapter of the rotation. Follow my Patreon for updates on this story and a Poll that will decide whether or not this story and the others will be moved to Patreon. - KingKarma_17666dReplied to Rickless1
well it's up to you but i assume your just a beginner as a writer... Your gonna have a hard time writing about a mc who is kind of emotionless and make the story awesome or cool at the same time... also tbh with his current abilities he would have already gotten scouted on other foreign clubs...
Ch 8 Cracks - KingKarma_17666dCommented
you should list out his abilities more clearly tbh on the last chapter... instead of doing like superman and leaf on wakanda stuff you should have like for a card there is Acceleration on there, for the other there is like pin point accuracy or stuff maybe speed, high jump, change of pace (Aomine), copy, ambidextrous for the talents instead of choosing unrealistic stuff you can also do some martial arts like Judo, Taekwondo and stuff that could be incorporated into Football
Ch 3 Striker. - KingKarma_17666dCommented
tf bro
I want to try and recreate it where MC is Morty and NTR his pathetic father. Taking both summer and Beth on adventure. - KingKarma_17666dCommented
oh nice no wild card 🥹
The other teams entered one by one. Shoei and Reo successfully broke through in the fourth team, just like Yoichi and Hyoma in the seventh team. - KingKarma_17666dCommented
lol Ichigo
As I said that, the door opened and I saw a orange-haired woman with green eyes walking through as she held a baby. This was Sumiko Shiba, Isshin's wife who he had married years ago. - KingKarma_17668dCommentedJust as Kuramochi imagined, Shigeno and Miyuki are compatible to some extent. The noisy daily life should be said, for Shigeno and Miyuki, is their normal daily life. still don't have the right way to fix it until today.
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you should go pro at this point
As well as a lateral breaking - Cutter. - KingKarma_17668dCommented
no he wasn't that fast on his highschool years he reached it when he went to America
"159 kmp/H hm...Same as the Major's protagonist Goro?" - KingKarma_17668dCommented
yo what
"Fastball speed 99 mp/H (159 kmp/H)."