Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: John Constantine

I always laugh when I see China referred to as “mysterious” in fics. The only thing mysterious is how communists were able to overthrow the democratically-elected rulers of their country and how it’s been decades and there hasn’t been another coup. Shocking that they can live with a one-party system.

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Your translation is not bad at all although there is still a lot of Chinese logic in the text that you should rework. As for the fact that Constantine is so attached to Hermione when he was so individualistic before... It's a bit of a shame for the development of the character who is suddenly contaminated by the personal desires of the author. That's the problem with amateur writers, they are incapable of controlling themselves..

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Thanks for the chapter can’t wait for the next