Scott47
Ok, the chapter is ok but could have been better, my thing here is that the the entire feels kinda robotic and there isn’t any life/ personality, the mc is just following his ‘program’ there is no questions about anything, he hasn’t gave his thoughts about being in another universe, fighting in a war where he can potentially die in it, he just simply acts that he is another clone, not a man who died and reincarnated into a clone but just another clone. The writing is also another thing everything is undescriptive (imo) it doesn’t write about what he does on his time on the cruiser or gave a description of what the mc see, feel, hear, or smell it’s just he gets on cruiser goes to admiral ask how long to planet “4hours” ok and then he waits…see what I’m trying to get at? There is not description or text to put it short. Thank you