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Iâm assuming Jake will grow taller since heâs 16yrs old and in his growing phase
Ok, the chapter is ok but could have been better, my thing here is that the the entire feels kinda robotic and there isnât any life/ personality, the mc is just following his âprogramâ there is no questions about anything, he hasnât gave his thoughts about being in another universe, fighting in a war where he can potentially die in it, he just simply acts that he is another clone, not a man who died and reincarnated into a clone but just another clone. The writing is also another thing everything is undescriptive (imo) it doesnât write about what he does on his time on the cruiser or gave a description of what the mc see, feel, hear, or smell itâs just he gets on cruiser goes to admiral ask how long to planet â4hoursâ ok and then he waitsâŚsee what Iâm trying to get at? There is not description or text to put it short. Thank you
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Nice chapter, a bit short could have made it a bit longer. The mc really wasnât suprised and shocked about himself being reincarnated as an Arc trooper, he just took it like it was another Monday to which bothered me a bit b/c I hoped he would be in a dilemma about the whole thing but other than that good first chapter đ. Is the MC in with a Jedi and what does his armor look if you could give a description or picture. Thank you đ
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Washed over him*