You really made it so his own flames can burn him? Made him kill his own sister. Gave hin daddy issues and relatively weak powers compared to others in DC. this is not off to a good start author.
I've liked Savage in DC and Doom in Marvel. Great characters that are usually exaggerated to become super villains in most Fanfic I see. But to me, they just happen to have agendas that heroes disapprove of. Thanks for the chapters đ¤đ¤