Comments of chapter undefined of Souls in Teyvat

Souls in Teyvat

ARandomMob

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LindorLv4Lindor

If I remember correctly, the clan leaders were killed by Scaramouche in his revenge against the shogun for rejecting him. Although I don't know if this is the case with Ayato's parents. TFTC

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Aun_AqeelLv4Aun_Aqeel

i think this chapter was fine since it's very kenshin like especially since it actually seems like he matured slightly though I am curious who will be in his harem.

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EridoLv4Erido

don't be so hard on yourself that was a very funny chapter

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Keisen_ShishigoLv4Keisen_Shishigo

Maybe at some point he will slapping the Shogun's cheeks instead of random guards.

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Kono_TimodaLv3Kono_Timoda

Boy please, you have nothing to worry about. Even if you make a mistake or make a horrible writing choice, so what? You are the owner of this story and you don't need to take stupid complaints to heart. Ofc if it genuine criticism, learn from it but that's it. You are doing a great job anyone that knows quality novels/fiction can see you have something good here

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i_dont_know_if_heLv4i_dont_know_if_he

Wait, so you mean this story actually has more than the current amount of chapters (20) and I won't have to worry about it suddenly stopping?! Praise!!!

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LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Thanks for the chapter

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Sangre60TenibrisLv4Sangre60Tenibris

Thanks for the chapter

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Star_Lord_1201Lv4Star_Lord_1201

thanks for the great chapter

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KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

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HOSLv4HOS

Nah, the chapter is fine but you should have make him slightly respectful to Raiden then. After all he doesn't know her character well since she might just instantly turn him into la Signora.

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