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then what about HSR? will this be the only trip with 20 chapters at most then return to genshin ? I feel like(just in my opinion) it would be more interesting if he could just jump between those two worlds, when in a world time moves slower or something because space-time vodo . also will the power he gets from HSR be completely sealed/weakened or partial with restrictions till he gets stronger there too?
actually that sounds like a good idea, if you are worn out in genshin sending him to HSR sounds like a fun good plan in my opinion. I don't know alot about HSR but from what I know it will be interesting to see Kenshin cause more chaos with trailblazer. also I don't know how writing plot and going with genshin plot is but do you plan on him going with the traveler on the same quests in the game? or will he meet the traveler from time to time while he does his own thing ? also I would like to say that you have done an amazing job till now so continue with whatever suits you, just don't drop it and do whatever else you want , I think you will do just fine
to be honest, I don't completely understand or get the emotional reunion of this chapter ( either I'm too tired and sleepy to understand , which likely is the case. or the last spec of emotions have disappeared from my dark soul after watching itachi and many other legendary character deaths ) but I can see that this chapter was carefully written with a lot of hard work, so thank you author-nim for your dedication and this amazing chapter ! [ps: this is my first fanfic that I write something other than' thanks for the chapter' so I don't know what exactly to say or reply? honestly I don't even know why I wrote this but wanted to give it a try also, hope you all have a good day !]
I get why you are frustrated author-nim , but don't let them discourage you ,your novel is already good and keep continuing with your plans! this is a nice change of pace since some fanfics the mc become op after the 10th chapter and hide their abilities to face slap them later. also, thanks for the great chapter !