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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter. A Black Prodigy

Harume_V2
Harume_V2Lv4Harume_V2

Hmm it's a decent start I could see a few ways this could improve such as using brackets like [System/Stats], {For temporary stats like buffs}, and maybe bullets • for skills

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Alexander830478
Alexander830478Lv4Alexander830478

give as more chapter I will give u 10 vote for my different accounts

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Rocky_Staggs
Rocky_StaggsLv15Rocky_Staggs

Hope he doesn't forget about lining up a magical guardian.

Tenzing_Choeying_5139
Tenzing_Choeying_5139Lv13Tenzing_Choeying_5139

Can you make an alternate story without the system?

Bierbart
BierbartLv14Bierbart

uff he has a useless system which arrived late and he even wished for it himself?oO

Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3Trouxa_157

Thanks for chapter 😁

FanboyDeowerpower
FanboyDeowerpowerLv11FanboyDeowerpower

Bora upar, treinamento do saitama e dentro

bobuchiha
bobuchihaLv3bobuchiha

En que línea de tiempo se encuentra?

bhanu5555
bhanu5555Lv13bhanu5555

Great start. Thanks for the chapter

Back_Space_4082
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