Comments of chapter undefined of I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

He should have beat her senseless. Headbutt me? Get your teeth knocked out.

Get rid of this gamora. I never fond of her in this novel.

Thanks for the Chapter

Great Chapter man. I was excited once I'd found this because I loved your Voldemort series. Look forward to more great chapters.

I will pass. I found the Spider-Man story far better, other than the obvious comparisons I find this story boring, the MC is... lacking, the mashup of worlds is a mess, there are many holes that are very loosely "patched", some that made no sense and its a feeling I can't shake after so many chapters, the worlds were taken as is and mashed up like each empire, worlds, etc would not be different by the very difference of this world yet they are all identical to how we know them yet connected. The MC... meh, I just don't feel like he is good enough, it feels a lot like the intention was for him to be powerful, competent, capable and then it is being nerfed or held back by using his personality to balance it. Anyway, I found it mostly boring, a struggle to read, back to catch up on spider-man, that one wanted an OP MC, went for it and it works, this one went for OP MC (50K+ of force) then back tracked with far far to long growth period. Could it improve? Sure, but like many novels that say: It gets better after 50-100 chapters, I won't be around to read it.

Thanks for the chapter

caught up with your spider-man book today and already with this one right after, you really write great fan-fictions. Going to start the voldemort one tomorrow :)

gracias por el capitulo

Merci pour le chapitre !