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Interesting so far, but the modern language is breaking my immersion. I had to double check the era is supposed to be 1947 because no one talks like it. It might as well be set in 2017 from the way it sounds. This was a good opportunity to add another layer of challenges for the MC to overcome in the beginning.
The story will have lots of sad and heartwarming tales. Book 1 is about Michael Wilson The Vigilante Spider Man. Then Book 2 is about Michael and his dad, Edward Wilson. Book 3 is when Michael teaches Peter Parker about being Spider-Man and why it's important to be responsible. This is where the plot started Remember this phrases: "With great power comes great responsibility."