Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Uzushiogakure with template System

Pacing Too Fast The Chapters Short You Forget put in konoha Year Is Mc Born Same Year As Tsuande And Jiraya Where Is Shanks Sword Skills And Charka Nature And if He Has all Charka Nature Or One ,Three Plus Is There Romance Or Harem Add More Characters Story ,Backgrounds Flesh Out The Story More And Love Of God Dont Make Shanks Scars And Missing A Arm I Want See Shanks Full Potiential With Both Arms Last Thing Dont Make Shanks Op At Story I Want See The Character Development From Him And Other Characters Growth As Well

Roger Sword Suit Shanks For Me