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Yasaka ,Tiamat,Amatersu,Izanami,Rossweisse,Sairaorg , Riser Mother, Some Greeks Egypt Norse Hindu And Celtic Gods I Love Your Chapters Keep The The Good Work Hope You Make Dxd Story The Mc Is Became Ddraig Or Son Of Crom Cuach
Pacing Too Fast The Chapters Short You Forget put in konoha Year Is Mc Born Same Year As Tsuande And Jiraya Where Is Shanks Sword Skills And Charka Nature And if He Has all Charka Nature Or One ,Three Plus Is There Romance Or Harem Add More Characters Story ,Backgrounds Flesh Out The Story More And Love Of God Dont Make Shanks Scars And Missing A Arm I Want See Shanks Full Potiential With Both Arms Last Thing Dont Make Shanks Op At Story I Want See The Character Development From Him And Other Characters Growth As Well
This Chapter Was The Bomb I Like It More Heat More Chapters Please