Comments of chapter undefined of The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
A_Real_Werewolf234
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good overall but author you missed something. the change in mentality what caused it why it happened it should be stated in the writing not to be guessed by the reader. Going from normal person to Chinese MC personality should be explained
all im saying is you need more info dump for the change. like add the mentality of the normal Custodian and it will also be more understandable for non 40k fans. chinese mc was just a reference 🤣🤣 for quick change.
A_Real_Werewolf234:He never became ‘Chinese’ he became like a Custodes from 40k. I thought this was easy to understand. ‘His body and soul were broken down and rebuilt from the ground up’ How is that not clear to why he changed so much?
great chapter werewolf234 🫡keep doing whatcha doing brother don't get discouraged or hampered down just Gloss over and let the comments flow like water bro as for romance hold off on that till you really decide on what you want to do 🫡 anyw looking forward to seeing him use his nanotechnology to steal and convert tech into his own maybe steal a bio-ship from the white ones 😏
